Giải đề"Today, many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and less time on sports. Why? Is it a positive or a negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Today, many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and less time on sports. Why? Is it a positive or a negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng này là dạng 2 question, nên sẽ chia bố cục bài văn như sau:
  • Body 1: viết trả lời câu hỏi Why
    • Main idea 1:  the sedentary lifestyle favoured by a large number of children, especially those living in big cities  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: As computerized games growth, children develop their sedentary lifestyle correspondingly) >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic GAME trong IELTS 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Compared to sports, computer games are less physically demanding, and therefore draw much more attention from these lazy, inactive children.
        • The fact that children are familiar with long sitting erects a psychological barrier to outdoor physical activities.  
      • Example: In HCMC and other metropolitan areas, many children, like Jack and Emily from the Smith family, are embracing sedentary lifestyles due to the widespread influence of computerized games, offering a convenient source of solace and entertainment amid the demands of their parents' busy schedules and academically focused school environments.
    • Main idea 2: parents do not bother about the screen time because they will not be disturbed as long as their children are hooked to the machine.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Young people develop addiction to computers and do not favour playing sports. 
        • They feel outdoor activities are tiring and require enormous physical efforts. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ Vựng IELTS Topic TECHNOLOGY

• Body 2: viết trả lời câu hỏi Is it a positive or a negative development? Trong đó body 2 nếu IELTS TUTOR Theo quan điểm là negative thì sẽ nêu ra 1 hoặc 2 lí do vì sao lại là negative 
  • Main idea 1: using a computer for a long time affects directly on eyes of children and their physical growth  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: This habit has harmful effects on their mental and physical health)
    • Supporting idea:
      • This will increase many health issues and will strain our future generations.
      • Prolonged screen exposure will cause vision related issues alongside obesity because it does not involve any body movements.
    • Example: For example, children who allocate a substantial part of their time for video games are more likely to contract cardiovascular and osteoarthritis diseases. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Main idea 2: if they do not play outside sports, it will turn them into introverts who lack adequate communication skills.  
    • Supporting idea: When children spend long hours on the computer, they become isolated from the society/their peers
    • Example: 

      In suburban Da Nang, the Johnson family's children, Sarah and James, experiencing a lack of outdoor sports, have inadvertently developed introversion and deficient communication skills, as their predominantly computer-focused activities limit engagement in outdoor sports and social interactions with peers in their quiet neighborhood.

• Body 2: viết trả lời câu hỏi Is it a positive or a negative development? Trong đó body 2 nếu IELTS TUTOR Theo quan điểm là negative thì sẽ nêu ra 1 hoặc 2 lí do vì sao lại là negative 
  • Main idea 1: using a computer for a long time affects directly on eyes of children and their physical growth  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: This habit has harmful effects on their mental and physical health)
    • Supporting idea:
      • This will increase many health issues and will strain our future generations.
      • Prolonged screen exposure will cause vision related issues alongside obesity because it does not involve any body movements.
    • Example: For example, children who allocate a substantial part of their time for video games are more likely to contract cardiovascular and osteoarthritis diseases. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn   PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
  • Main idea 2: if they do not play outside sports, it will turn them into introverts who lack adequate communication skills.  
    • Supporting idea: When children spend long hours on the computer, they become isolated from the society/their peers

• IELTS TUTOR gợi ý các ý khác:

  • Main idea: The majority of games on electronic devices are violent rather than educational

  • Supporting idea: This means excessive exposure to those game plots builds up children’s mental impairment and tendency towards anti-social behaviors, contributing to higher crime rate in the future.

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