Phân tích essay"Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think having a younger leader would be better. Do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Kèm bài sửa)

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Leaders and directors in an organisation are normally older people. Some people think having a younger leader would be better. Do you agree or disagree?

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY DISAGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: it is usually difficult for the young to compete with the old in terms of experience  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: years of experience in a relevant position tend to make the elderly better candidates than those who are relatively young and new to the tasks)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "experience" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
        • Those who have gained adequate experience can more effectively manage to lead the individuals of an organization than those who do not  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt "experience" và "experiences" trong tiếng anh
        • Business matters often require the people in charge to have not only the knowledge of coping with problematic situations but also strong nerves to calmly find a feasible solution. 
      • Example: Consider the field of medicine, where experience plays a crucial role in patient care and decision-making. A surgeon with decades of experience has performed countless procedures, refined their skills through trial and error, and gained a deep understanding of the human body. This extensive experience allows them to make informed judgments, anticipate potential complications, and navigate unexpected challenges during surgery.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY DISAGREE
    • Main idea: older people seem to be more respected than others and have a more powerful voice within a company  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: they are likely to receive more support from the people in an organization)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Employees are more likely to follow their orders, and so they could easily run the operation of the company  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Diễn đạt "trải qua giai đoạn..." (Cách paraphrase "undergo")
        • As the time spent working with the staff of the senior is often longer, they can understand their colleagues better, achieving more popularity >< Younger members will need more time to make contributions over time to prove themselves worthy.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Các từ / cấu trúc thường được paraphrase IELTS WRITING
      • Example: Consider a long-established manufacturing company where a significant portion of the workforce has been with the company for decades. These experienced employees have witnessed the company's growth and evolution firsthand, contributing their skills and expertise to its success. Their years of service, combined with their accumulated knowledge and insights, have earned them the respect and trust of their colleagues and superiors.

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