Phân tích đề "Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15 while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15 while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Bài này có 2 cách làm

• Body 1: trả lời câu hỏi số 1 What are the benefits of each system? 
  • ​Nêu 1 hoặc 2 benefits của việc focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, có thể triển khai:
    • Benefit: relieves students’ study pressure >> students who study only a few subjects have more time for other purposes than those studying so many.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
  • ​Nêu 1 hoặc 2 benefits của việc to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school, có thể triển khai:
    • An education system comprised of a huge number of subjects is often believed to provide students with solid foundations of different natural and societal concepts >> Having a chance to attend many classes, students are taught numerous lessons related to various fields, many of which can be of great help when they grow up.

• Body 2: trả lời câu hỏi số 2 Which is better?
  • Nếu chọn theo hướng focus on certain subjects at the age of 15 tốt hơn sẽ nêu 2 lí do vì sao lại tốt hơn, có thể triển khai: 
    • Lí do thứ 1: Độ tuổi 15 tiếp cận những môn học chuyên sâu sẽ giúp học sinh định hướng sau này sẽ theo ngành nghề nào 
    • Lí do thứ 2: Có nhiều thời gian đầu tư vào các môn chuyên tăng kĩ năng & kiến thức, giúp dễ xin việc làm sau này hơn 

• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15 
    • Main idea 1: Specializing early allows students to delve deeply into specific subjects and develop expertise at a younger age.
      • Supporting idea: This intense focus can result in a higher level of expertise compared to a more generalized education.
      • Example: Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart, born in 1756, exemplifies early specialization in music, showcasing proficiency in multiple instruments and composition by the age of six under his father's guidance.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Main idea 2: Specialization can be more efficient in terms of time and resources, as students can concentrate on a narrower set of subjects that align with their interests and career goals.
      • Supporting idea: This targeted approach can lead to more efficient skill acquisition and mastery in a shorter time frame.
      • Example: Bill Gates, the co-founder of Microsoft, exemplifies the efficiency of specialization by immersing himself in computer programming during his early years, leading to his success in coding and software development.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Exposure to a broad range of subjects promotes a more well-rounded education, fostering critical thinking, creativity, and a diverse skill set.
      • Supporting idea: This approach emphasizes the interconnectedness of knowledge and promotes a more comprehensive understanding of the world.
      • Example: Leonardo da Vinci, the Renaissance polymath, extended his education beyond the arts, encompassing studies in anatomy, engineering, mathematics, and various scientific disciplines.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • Main idea 2: Interacting with various subjects can enhance social and interpersonal skills as students engage with different perspectives and ideas. 
      • Supporting idea: Engaging with diverse ideas encourages adaptability and effective communication across various domains.
      • Example: Steve Jobs, co-founder of Apple Inc., underscored the significance of melding technology with liberal arts, asserting that a well-rounded education, incorporating exposure to the humanities, fosters the development of more empathetic and creative individuals.

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