Phân tích đề"Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than local people Why is this? What can be done to attract local people?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Kèm bài sửa TASK RESPONSE HS IELTS TUTOR)

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists rather than local people Why is this? What can be done to attract local people?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 question bố cục như sau:
  • Body 1: trả lời câu hỏi Why is this?
    • Main idea 1: người ta có xu hướng xem nhẹ những thứ quá gần gũi với mình hằng ngày, chỉ thích khám phá những cái mới (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý: many local people probably prefer to spend their free time and holidays visiting other areas outside of their hometown or country)
    • Main idea 2: nhiều khi người ta đã từng đến các địa điểm đó rồi nên việc không đến nữa cũng dễ hiểu (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý: it is possible that most local people have already visited such places and may already have significant knowledge of their own culture and history, and therefore they do not feel the need to return to these places often, or even at all)>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng Topic museum IELTS
  • Body 2: trả lời câu hỏi What can be done to attract local people?
    • Solution 1: museums and historical sites nên đầu tư để thu hút local people hơn (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý: One possible solution may be for local governments to continually upgrade museums by rotating artefacts and displays, in order to arouse more interest from locals HOẶC: The first step is for the authority to arrange appealing exhibits or programs at these sites)
      • Supporting idea: Different exhibitions could be displayed and promoted more often, focusing on different themes, or aspects of the culture. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic PARK trong IELTS SPEAKING
      • Example: For example, some didactic as well as recreational competitions should be held to stimulate the locals’ curiosity and interest, and therefore they could attract them to pay a visit to these places. 
    • Solution 2: chỉnh phủ hộ trợ giá vé cho người dân, nhất là học sinh, sinh viên (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý: governments could also encourage and fund annual trips for local school children to museums and historical sites HOẶC: Another measure that can be taken is to lower admission fees or offer discount tickets to the locals to encourage them to visit these historical attractions)
  • IELTS TUTOR lưu ý: vì body 2 nếu tìm 2 solution giải quyết cho từng causes ở body 1 sẽ hơi khó triển khai nên với đề này có thể viết solution không tương ứng để dễ viết hơn nhé 

• IELTS TUTOR gợi ý các ideas khác:

  • Many local people probably prefer to spend their free time and holidays visiting other areas outside of their hometown or country simply because they are more interested in learning about other cultures and history, rather than their own (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: people who live in the neighborhood are often familiar with their traditional customs and history. Therefore, they lean towards devoting their spare time to exploring the unseen or unknown at other places. Meanwhile, tourists tend to go to places that they have never been to so that they can have a better understanding of local cultures and arts)>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)

  • The expense of entrance fees to these historical sites may be a deterrent to many local people. Take the ancient citadel of Hue in Vietnam for example. When going to this place, visitors have to pay around 7 dollars, which is a great amount of money for average Vietnamese people.

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