Phân tích "A long distance flight consumes as much fuel as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So some people think we should abandon non essential flights (such as for tourism), and it is more efficient than restricting the car. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 6/7/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "A long distance flight consumes as much fuel as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So some people think we should abandon non essential flights (such as for tourism), and it is more efficient than restricting the car. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

A long distance flight consumes as much fuel as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So some people think we should abandon non essential flights (such as for tourism), and it is more efficient than restricting the car. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Flying is indeed bad for the planet because it contributes to global warming, pollution, and leaves a huge carbon footprint. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích: Contribute to sth
      • Supporting idea: The high rate of combustion of the fuel increases the amount of carbon emission, which directly affects the erosion of the ozone layer and therefore leading to global warming.
      • Example: A study published in Nature Communications found that the total climate impact of aviation, including non-CO2 effects, is around 4% of human-induced global warming, making it a significant contributor
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Aircrafts can cause noise pollution >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "cause"
      • Supporting idea: 
        • To those residing or those near airports are affected hugely by the noise. (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Especially to those living in the neighbourhood of an airport and around the flight paths, noise problems created by aircraft is a headache)
        • Some of the adverse effects that these people face include sleeping disturbances, performance effects, and interference with communication along with cardiovascular and psycho-psychological effects. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "effect" tiếng anh 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The environmental impact of long-distance flights, which consume as much fuel as cars over several years and produce equivalent pollution, has led some to advocate for abandoning non-essential flights, such as those for tourism. I completely agree with this viewpoint, as reducing air travel can significantly benefit the planet and alleviate noise pollution.

Firstly, flying is detrimental to the environment because it significantly contributes to global warming, pollution, and a large carbon footprint. The high rate of fuel combustion in aircraft increases carbon emissions, which directly affects the ozone layer's erosion and subsequently leads to global warming. A study published in Nature Communications found that the total climate impact of aviation, including non-CO2 effects, is around 4% of human-induced global warming, making it a significant contributor. By reducing non-essential flights, we can lower these harmful emissions and mitigate their effects on climate change.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Secondly, aircraft can cause substantial noise pollution, especially for those living near airports. Residents in these areas face numerous adverse effects, including sleep disturbances, impaired performance, and communication interference, as well as cardiovascular and psychological issues. The noise problems created by aircraft are a significant nuisance and health concern for these communities. By abandoning non-essential flights, the frequency of flights and consequently the level of noise pollution would decrease, improving the quality of life for people living near airports.

In conclusion, abandoning non-essential flights is a more efficient and effective approach than restricting car usage, as it would significantly reduce both environmental and noise pollution.

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