🔥Phân tích"Some people think that certain old buildings are more worth preserving than the other ones. Which types of old buildings should be preserved? Do you think that the advantages of preserving these old buildings outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2- Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó​

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Some people think that certain old buildings are more worth preserving than the other ones. Which types of old buildings should be preserved? Do you think that the advantages of preserving these old buildings outweigh the disadvantages?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Some people think that certain old buildings are more worth preserving than the other ones. Which types of old buildings should be preserved? Do you think that the advantages of preserving these old buildings outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 Which types of old buildings should be preserved? disadvantages?
    • Main idea 1: old buildings that are of archaeological, aesthetic, or architectural significance should be preserved >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Word form của "preserve" 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They might either be important to a culture or unique in terms of architecture. 
        • Reconstruction of such structures will trigger damage to cultural heritage and prevent architects from getting inspired by their predecessors.
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Old buildings made of higher quality materials should be rehabilitated.
      • Supporting idea:
        • Replacing old buildings with similar rare materials would be impractical and unaffordable.
        • Newer buildings also tend to have a life expectancy of only 30-40 years, whereas many older buildings were made to last. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt However/ Whereas 
        • It can make economic sense to retain historic buildings and Improve them to meet modern codes and requirements. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ SENSE trong tiếng anh
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 Do you think that the advantages of preserving these old buildings outweigh the disadvantages.
    • Main idea 1: (Lí do số 1 vì sao advantages > disadvantages) they have historical and cultural significance and economic value. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "historic" & "historical" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • An important part of what gives a city character and a sense of community is its history. 
        • The old buildings may have an important function in history and some are even the nations’ pride  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Old buildings are witnesses to the aesthetic and cultural history of a city, helping to give people a sense of place and connection to the past. Historic buildings often represent something famous or important to people who live in a city or those visiting) >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích Phrasal verb "witness to" 
      • Example: For instance, the Great Wall of China signifies the history of slaves’ perseverance (building the great wall of defence despite severe weather conditions) and the concerns over safety during that historical period. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "period" tiếng anh 
    • Main idea 2: (Lí do số 2 vì sao advantages > disadvantages) Rehabilitating old buildings to their original appearance can help attract investment as well as tourists.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Because of their uniqueness, antique buildings are supposed to act as a source of tourism income, if maintained well. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "supposed to" tiếng anh
      • Example: 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Preserving old buildings has sparked an ongoing debate, with some arguing that only certain types are worth the effort. In my opinion, heritage-rich (EN: containing cultural or historical importance – VI: giàu giá trị văn hóa hoặc lịch sử) buildings and those constructed with long-lasting materials (EN: materials that remain intact for many years – VI: vật liệu bền lâu) should be prioritized for preservation, and I believe that the advantages far outweigh the drawbacks.

The types of old buildings that deserve preservation include those of archaeological, aesthetic, or architectural value. These structures are often one-of-a-kind (EN: unique, unlike any other – VI: độc nhất vô nhị) and offer insight into the identity of a region. Demolishing (EN: destroying completely – VI: phá hủy) them may lead to irreversible loss (EN: damage that cannot be undone – VI: mất mát không thể phục hồi) of cultural heritage and eliminate sources of inspiration for future architects. Furthermore, buildings made of high-caliber materials (EN: of excellent quality – VI: vật liệu chất lượng cao) should also be preserved, as replacing them with modern equivalents would be cost-prohibitive (EN: too expensive to afford – VI: quá đắt để thực hiện). Unlike contemporary structures, which often last only a few decades, many old buildings were designed to endure for centuries. Thus, retrofitting (EN: upgrading existing buildings – VI: nâng cấp các tòa nhà hiện tại) them to meet current safety codes can be both economically and environmentally beneficial.

In my view, the benefits significantly surpass the downsides for various compelling reasons. Firstly, old buildings hold profound historical and cultural significance. They serve as tangible links (EN: physical connections – VI: sự liên kết hữu hình) to a city’s past, contributing to its distinct identity (EN: unique character – VI: bản sắc riêng biệt). For instance, the Great Wall of China is a testament to (EN: strong evidence of – VI: minh chứng cho) ancient perseverance and security concerns of that era. Secondly, beyond symbolism, preserving such structures can also fuel tourism-driven economies (EN: stimulate economies through tourism – VI: thúc đẩy kinh tế thông qua du lịch). Well-maintained antique landmarks (EN: historic sites – VI: địa danh cổ) often attract both foreign visitors and investment, contributing to urban revitalization (EN: improving and renewing cities – VI: tái sinh đô thị).

In conclusion, safeguarding historically and structurally significant buildings is essential not only for preserving cultural identity but also for promoting economic and environmental sustainability. Given their unique value and lasting impact, the advantages of preservation clearly outweigh the disadvantages.

✅ New Vocabulary List with Definitions:

1. heritage-rich (adj)

   • EN: containing significant historical or cultural value

   • VI: giàu giá trị lịch sử hoặc văn hóa

   • Synonyms: historically valuable, culturally significant, legacy-filled

   • Antonyms: modern, ordinary, unremarkable

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "In my opinion, heritage-rich buildings... should be prioritized..."

2. long-lasting materials (compound noun)

   • EN: materials that can endure over time

   • VI: vật liệu bền vững

   • Synonyms: durable materials, sturdy components, hard-wearing supplies

   • Antonyms: fragile materials, temporary elements, weak substances

3. one-of-a-kind (adj)

   • EN: unique; the only one like it

   • VI: độc nhất vô nhị

   • Synonyms: unique, singular, matchless

   • Antonyms: commonplace, typical, replicable>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

4. irreversible loss (noun phrase)

   • EN: something that, once lost, cannot be recovered

   • VI: mất mát không thể phục hồi

   • Synonyms: permanent damage, lasting destruction, unrecoverable harm

   • Antonyms: recoverable damage, reversible loss, repairable harm

5. retrofitting (noun)

   • EN: the act of adding new technology to old structures

   • VI: nâng cấp, cải tiến

   • Synonyms: renovating, upgrading, refurbishing

   • Antonyms: demolishing, abandoning, neglecting

6. testament to (idiom)

   • EN: clear proof or strong evidence of something

   • VI: minh chứng cho

   • Synonyms: proof of, evidence of, indication of

   • Antonyms: refutation of, denial of, contradiction of

7. fuel tourism-driven economies (verb phrase)

   • EN: boost economies by attracting tourists

   • VI: thúc đẩy kinh tế dựa vào du lịch

   • Synonyms: stimulate tourism industry, boost travel economy, spur heritage tourism

   • Antonyms: suppress tourism, limit development, halt economic growth

✅ Difficult Grammar Structures and Examples

1. Relative clause with reduced adjective clause

   • Original: "buildings that are of archaeological, aesthetic, or architectural value"

   • Reduced: "buildings of archaeological, aesthetic, or architectural value"

   • Translation: các tòa nhà có giá trị khảo cổ học, thẩm mỹ hoặc kiến trúc

2. Contrast structure: Unlike X, Y

   • Example: "Unlike contemporary structures, which often last only a few decades, many old buildings were designed to endure..."

   • Translation: Không giống các công trình hiện đại, vốn chỉ tồn tại vài thập kỷ, nhiều tòa nhà cổ được thiết kế để tồn tại lâu dài.

3. Conditional with modal for advice

   • Example: "If maintained well, antique buildings are supposed to act as a source of tourism income."

   • Translation: Nếu được bảo trì tốt, các tòa nhà cổ có thể trở thành nguồn thu từ du lịch.

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