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All fathers should be entitled to time off from work when their children are born. What is your opinion?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Just like the mother, the father may also experience a lot of stress and tension in the days prior to and immediately after the birth of their child.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The paternity leave makes it easy for them to cope with this situation. 
        • If the husband is working at office when his wife is in labour, he is going to experience a great deal of stress due to his inability to support his wife during the delivery of their baby.  
        • His concentration on his work will reduce affecting quality.
        • This short leave entitlement will not only enable the fathers to be with wives during the delivery but also provide work-life balance so that the quality of work is not compromised.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: husbands can help their wives to take care of the baby
      • Supporting idea:
        • Childbirth can be excruciatingly painful for the woman and she desperately needs someone to help her in the days immediately after the delivery. 
        • A husband can be of immense help to a woman if he is around her and her baby in the days immediately after delivery. >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp TỪ VỰNG TOPIC PHỤ NỮ (WOMEN/GIRL) TIẾNG ANH
      • Example: According to current empirical research conducted by the School of Psychology Australia, postpartum depression is a severe and life-threatening disease that affects 4 out of 10 mothers each year. The only way to cure it is to assist fathers who are eligible to paternity leave during that time >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "Affect, Effect & influence" tiếng anh

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

It is widely argued that all fathers should be granted time away from their jobs when their children are born. I strongly support this view because paternity leave helps fathers manage the emotional pressure surrounding childbirth and enables them to provide crucial support for their partners during the early stages of parenthood.

One compelling reason why fathers should be entitled to leave is that childbirth can be a high-stress period (giai đoạn căng thẳng cao – a time involving intense pressure) not only for mothers but also for fathers. During the days leading up to and immediately after the birth, many men experience considerable emotional strain (áp lực cảm xúc đáng kể – strong psychological pressure) because they worry about the health of both the mother and the baby. If a father is required to remain at work while his wife is in labour, he may suffer from divided attention (sự phân tâm – inability to focus fully on one task), which can reduce his workplace productivity (năng suất làm việc – efficiency in performing job tasks). Granting fathers short-term leave would therefore contribute to a healthier work–life balance (sự cân bằng công việc – cuộc sống – the equilibrium between professional duties and personal life). As a result, employees can return to work with greater focus and motivation once the critical period surrounding childbirth has passed.>> 🔥 Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Another significant justification is that fathers can play a vital role in assisting their wives with postnatal recovery (quá trình hồi phục sau sinh – the physical and emotional healing after childbirth) and newborn care (chăm sóc trẻ sơ sinh – looking after a newly born baby). Childbirth is often an excruciatingly painful (vô cùng đau đớn – extremely painful) experience, and many mothers require constant assistance in the days following delivery. When fathers are present at home, they can help with household responsibilities and provide emotional reassurance. Furthermore, research has indicated that many women suffer from postpartum depression (trầm cảm sau sinh – a serious mental health condition after childbirth), and having a supportive partner nearby can significantly alleviate this condition. For instance, psychological studies have shown that mothers who receive strong family support during this period recover more quickly and develop healthier relationships with their infants.

In conclusion, I firmly believe that fathers should be granted paternity leave because it reduces emotional stress for working fathers and allows them to provide essential support for their wives and newborn children.

Key Vocabulary

1. high-stress period (giai đoạn căng thẳng cao – a time involving intense pressure)
Synonyms: tense period, stressful phase, pressure-filled time
Antonyms: relaxed period, calm phase, peaceful time
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Childbirth can be a high-stress period not only for mothers but also for fathers.”

2. emotional strain (áp lực cảm xúc – strong psychological pressure)
Synonyms: psychological stress, emotional pressure, mental burden
Antonyms: emotional stability, peace of mind, psychological comfort
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Many men experience considerable emotional strain because they worry about the health of both the mother and the baby.”

3. divided attention (sự phân tâm – inability to focus completely)
Synonyms: lack of concentration, distracted focus, split attention
Antonyms: full concentration, undivided attention, total focus
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4. workplace productivity (năng suất làm việc – efficiency in performing job tasks)
Synonyms: work efficiency, job performance, professional output
Antonyms: low efficiency, poor performance, reduced output
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “This can reduce his workplace productivity.”

5. work–life balance (sự cân bằng công việc – cuộc sống – balance between career and personal life)
Synonyms: life-work harmony, balanced lifestyle, personal-professional equilibrium
Antonyms: work overload, career dominance, life imbalance
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Granting fathers leave would contribute to a healthier work–life balance.”

6. postnatal recovery (quá trình hồi phục sau sinh – healing period after childbirth)
Synonyms: postpartum recovery, maternal recovery period, childbirth recovery
Antonyms: physical deterioration, health decline, medical complication
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Fathers can assist their wives with postnatal recovery.”

7. newborn care (chăm sóc trẻ sơ sinh – taking care of a baby)
Synonyms: infant care, baby care, neonatal care
Antonyms: child neglect, lack of care, parental absence
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8. postpartum depression (trầm cảm sau sinh – serious depression after childbirth)
Synonyms: postnatal depression, maternal depression, childbirth-related depression
Antonyms: emotional wellbeing, maternal happiness, mental stability
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Many women suffer from postpartum depression after childbirth.”

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