Phân tích "All fathers should be entitled to time off from work when their children are born. What is your opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (COMPUTER-BASED 23/6/2022)

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "All fathers should be entitled to time off from work when their children are born. What is your opinion?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (COMPUTER-BASED 23/6/2022)

I. Đề bài

All fathers should be entitled to time off from work when their children are born. What is your opinion?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
      • Main idea: Just like the mother, the father may also experience a lot of stress and tension in the days prior to and immediately after the birth of their child.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • The paternity leave makes it easy for them to cope with this situation. 
          • If the husband is working at office when his wife is in labour, he is going to experience a great deal of stress due to his inability to support his wife during the delivery of their baby.  
          • His concentration on his work will reduce affecting quality.
          • This short leave entitlement will not only enable the fathers to be with wives during the delivery but also provide work-life balance so that the quality of work is not compromised.
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
      • Main idea: husbands can help their wives to take care of the baby
        • Supporting idea:
          • Childbirth can be excruciatingly painful for the woman and she desperately needs someone to help her in the days immediately after the delivery. 
          • A husband can be of immense help to a woman if he is around her and her baby in the days immediately after delivery. >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp TỪ VỰNG TOPIC PHỤ NỮ (WOMEN/GIRL) TIẾNG ANH
        • Example: According to current empirical research conducted by the School of Psychology Australia, postpartum depression is a severe and life-threatening disease that affects 4 out of 10 mothers each year. The only way to cure it is to assist fathers who are eligible to paternity leave during that time >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Phân biệt "Affect, Effect & influence" tiếng anh

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