Giải đề"Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion." IELTS GENERAL WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 6/4/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion." IELTS GENERAL WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 6/4/2024)

Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm earning less money and having more free time
    • Main idea 1: Having more free time allows for a better balance between work and personal life. 
      • Supporting idea: This balance is crucial for mental well-being, fostering relationships, and pursuing interests outside of work.
      • Example:  For example, a meta-analysis published in the Journal of Occupational Health Psychology found that long working hours were associated with increased levels of depression and anxiety. Conversely, having more free time has been linked to lower stress levels and improved overall psychological well-being.
    • Main idea 2: Time is a finite resource, and having more of it to spend with loved ones, engage in leisure activities, or simply relax can greatly enhance one's quality of life. 
      • Supporting idea: Money cannot buy back time once it's spent.
      • Example: My friend Sarah's experience exemplifies how prioritizing time over money can lead to a more fulfilling life, as her career change to a role with better work-life balance granted her the opportunity to spend more meaningful moments with family, indulge in hobbies like painting, and recharge, illustrating that once time is spent, it cannot be reclaimed, emphasizing the invaluable nature of time in contrast to monetary compensation.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Having more money and less free time & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Having more money generally provides a sense of financial security. 
      • Supporting idea: It allows individuals to afford necessities without much worry and may even provide a cushion for unexpected expenses or emergencies.
      • Example: The 2017 study published in the Journal of Economic Psychology revealed a distinct correlation between income and financial stress, as individuals with higher incomes reported markedly lower levels of financial strain, indicating that increased wealth serves as a protective factor against economic anxiety.
    • Main idea 2: With more money, individuals may have access to more opportunities, such as traveling, pursuing hobbies, or investing in personal development. 
      • Supporting idea: These experiences can enrich life and provide fulfillment.

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