Giải đề"Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life. Why is this trend occurring? What are the impacts of this development on both family and society?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 9/11/2023)

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Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life. Why is this trend occurring? What are the impacts of this development on both family and society?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Đầu tiên phải xác định cho được dạng này là dạng 2 Question, và nắm vững cách viết dạng 2 question trong IELTS WRITING TASK 2

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• INTRODUCTION: Giới thiệu qua topic và câu số 2 của introduction không cần nêu reasons và effects cụ thể là gì ra mà chỉ cần nói There are some reasons for this tendency, and it could have some impacts on family life as well as society chung chung là đủ cho dạng này 
• BODY 1: Trả lời cho câu hỏi số 1: Why is this trend occurring? (Luôn nhớ đối với dạng 2 questions thì mỗi đoạn thân bài sẽ trả lời cho 1 câu hỏi)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ "reason" tiếng anh
  • Thông thường nên nêu ra 2 reasons, không nên cố list cho nhiều reasons ra, mà chỉ cần nêu kĩ lưỡng 2 reasons, và trong mỗi reasons phải nêu cho rõ Main idea >> Supporting ideas >> Example 
  • Trong một vài topic quá khó nghĩ ra ý có thể chỉ cần viết 1 reason cũng được, 
• BODY 2: Trả lời cho câu hỏi số 2: What are the effects on society and family life? (Luôn nhớ đối với dạng 2 questions thì mỗi đoạn thân bài sẽ trả lời cho 1 câu hỏi) 
• CONCLUSION: Khẳng định lại câu trả lời của 2 câu hỏi, tức là paraphrase lại câu số 2 của INTRODUCTION

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi "Why is this trend occurring?"
  • Main idea 1: The fact that pregnancy has been more common in older women stems from late marriage 
    • Supporting idea: Late marriage would help singles have more time to seek a stable job and broaden behavioral experience before deciding to live with someone forever >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase từ "HELP" trong tiếng anh
    • Example: My aunt - Sarah, 35, happily married with a fulfilling job and a love for travel, cautiously considers the risks of pregnancy at her age, leading her and her husband to wait a few more years before starting a family.
  • Main idea 2: It is widely believed that children are raised better by older parents
    • Supporting idea: TYING THE KNOT EARLY, in some cases, would cause constant quarrels about rights of child-rearing between young couples due to their immature thoughts on marital values ><  DELAYED MARRIAGE may secure better conditions for children’s future (HOẶC: older fathers and mothers are generally wealthier, more experienced, and more willing to take the responsibility of bringing up a child)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ "lead to" tiếng anh
    • Example: My friend - John and Mary, married at 20, had a child early but, realizing their unpreparedness for parenthood, chose divorce to provide a more stable environment for their child amid constant disagreements.
• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi "What are the impacts of this development on both family and society?"
  • Main idea 1: (Nên viết về family life): having children later will cause a significant age gap between the two generations.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "find out / discover/learn" IELTS
    • Supporting idea: This makes it harder for parents to understand and communicate with their offspring
    • Example: My uncle, the Smiths, faced communication challenges with their adolescent kids due to a substantial age gap, having opted for parenthood in their late 40s.

  • Main idea 2: (Nên viết về society) Having children when reaching over 35 can affect pregnancy due to aging health >> This might adversely affect the quality of the future workforce if too many people decide to follow this trend
    • Supporting idea:  Babies are not healthy enough or even die premature death because mothers' health will decline (HOẶC: when an aged couple decides to give birth, there are serious health risks for the woman in the prenatal and postnatal period)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Family (child education, child birth...) IELTS
    • Example: In Japan, the rising average age of first-time mothers, reaching 30.9 years in 2020 from 25.6 in 1970, is worrisome as it correlates with an increased risk of health issues in babies, with twice the rate of premature births among mothers over 35 compared to those under 30.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Many men and women are deciding to have children later in life, a trend driven by several socio-economic factors. This shift has significant implications for both family dynamics and societal health.

There are many causes leading to this trend, among which the prevalence of late marriages is a primary factor. Late marriage allows singles more time to secure stable employment and gain life experience before committing to a lifelong partnership. For instance, my aunt Sarah, who is 35, happily married, and enjoys a fulfilling career and travel, has chosen to wait a few more years before starting a family due to the cautious consideration of pregnancy risks at her age. Additionally, it is widely believed that older parents can raise children better. Early marriages sometimes lead to constant quarrels over child-rearing due to immature thoughts on marital values. In contrast, delayed marriages can provide better conditions for children’s future, as older parents are generally wealthier, more experienced, and more willing to take on the responsibility of raising a child. For example, my friends John and Mary married at 20 and had a child early but eventually divorced, realizing their unpreparedness for parenthood, and opted to provide a more stable environment for their child.>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

Having children later in life has considerable impacts on family and society. Within the family, a significant age gap between parents and children can make understanding and communication more challenging. For example, my uncle, the Smiths, who became parents in their late 40s, struggled with communication challenges with their adolescent kids due to the substantial age gap. On a societal level, having children after the age of 35 can affect pregnancy due to aging health, potentially impacting the quality of the future workforce. For instance, in Japan, the rising average age of first-time mothers, which reached 30.9 years in 2020 from 25.6 in 1970, is concerning as it correlates with increased health risks in babies, including a higher rate of premature births among mothers over 35 compared to those under 30.

In conclusion, while the trend of later parenthood is influenced by socio-economic factors and perceived benefits for child-rearing, it poses challenges for family communication and potential risks to societal health.

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