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Bên cạnh Sửa chi tiết 2 lần Câu hỏi Part 1 IELTS SPEAKING: Do you work or are you a student?, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"Many people believe that family has the strongest influence on a child’s development, while others believe that external factors such as television, friends and music play a big role. Discuss both views" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi 29/8/2023 & 23/1/2024)
I. Đề bài
- Many people believe that family has the strongest influence on a child’s development, while others believe that external factors such as television, friends and music play a big role. Discuss both views
II. Kiến thức liên quan
III. Phân tích
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- Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others believe that external factors such as television, friends and music play a big role
- Main idea 1: As children grow, peer relationships become increasingly influential.
- Supporting idea: Friends can impact behavior, attitudes, and even academic performance. Peer pressure, both positive and negative, can shape a child's choices>> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
- Example: My niece Sarah's academic performance declined as she succumbed to the influence of a peer group that devalued education, highlighting the powerful impact of peer relationships on a child's choices and attitudes.
- Main idea 2: Television, music, and other forms of media play a significant role in shaping a child's perceptions and behaviors.
- Supporting idea: Exposure to diverse media content can introduce children to different cultures, ideas, and perspectives, but it can also influence behavior and attitudes.
- Example: Exposure to diverse music genres through media can either enhance a child's cultural awareness and inclusivity or contribute to the formation of stereotypes and biased attitudes, showcasing the significant impact of media on shaping perceptions and behaviors.
- Main idea 1: As children grow, peer relationships become increasingly influential.
- Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Many people believe that family has the strongest influence on a child’s development & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này
- Main idea 1: Most of the children mimic their parents’ activities and thus parents have a greater role in setting good examples for their kids. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "thus" tiếng anh
- Supporting idea: The reason behind most children imitating their parents' actions lies in the influential role parents play in shaping their children's behaviors, emphasizing the significant responsibility parents have in providing positive models for their offspring to emulate.
- Example: For example, parents who regularly argue with others may find that their child both imitate them and consider this bad practice as an ideal life tactic to solve >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "practice" tiếng anh
- Main idea 2: Parents are more close to children and they can teach their kids the important aspects of being a good member of the society. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Paraphrase từ "factor/aspect" (Diễn đạt "tiêu chí" tiếng anh)
- Supporting idea: Parents' proximity to their children fosters a unique bond through which they can impart crucial lessons about becoming valuable contributors to society, leveraging their close relationship to instill essential values and behaviors
- Example: For instance, parents may teach their children and guide them to assist poor people by providing the food prepared by their parents. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng cụm "for instance" tiếng anh
- Main idea 1: Most of the children mimic their parents’ activities and thus parents have a greater role in setting good examples for their kids. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "thus" tiếng anh
- Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others believe that external factors such as television, friends and music play a big role
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