Giải đề"Many people believe that individuals over 65 should not be allowed to continue working. Others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 2

Bên cạnh cung cấp thêm PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), Hãy đọc kĩ Giải đề"Many people believe that individuals over 65 should not be allowed to continue working. Others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion."IELTS WRITING GENERAL TRAINING TASK 2

Many people believe that individuals over 65 should not be allowed to continue working. Others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Many people believe that individuals over 65 should not be allowed to continue working.  
    • Main idea 1: Encourage greater financial independence    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH PARAPHRASE TỪ "ADVISE" TIẾNG ANH
      • Supporting idea: Older workers can continue to earn salaries to financially support themselves and not solely depend on their pensions or family (HOẶC: Some retirees who chose not to work and rely on their savings are constantly stressed trying to make ends meet)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "stressed" tiếng anh (Diễn đạt "bị căng thẳng")
      • Example: Many companies have engaged their former employees after they attain the age of retirement in contract mentorship positions to ensure these valuable members of the organisation are available to coach the younger generation and provide continuity of knowledge.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "engage" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: The store of knowledge possessed by the retiree is not lost  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt "Loss" "Lose" "Lost" và "Loose" trong tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Having spent many years honing their craft, it would be a waste to lose those skillsets of the older generation when they reach the age of retirement.
      • Example: A retired engineer dedicates his time to volunteering, teaching engineering students at a local community college, and imparts his knowledge and experience to assist them in acquiring the necessary skills for future career success.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Others think that people should be allowed to work for as long as they choose. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Concerns exist about older workers occupying positions that younger individuals may need, leading to potential job scarcity for the younger workforce.
      • Supporting idea: This concern is particularly evident in fields where seniority often determines promotion or hiring decisions, impacting younger individuals' career progression.
      • Example: For instance, in some industries, senior employees staying in their roles might reduce advancement opportunities for younger professionals who are seeking higher positions or entry-level jobs, potentially leading to job scarcity for the younger workforce. 
    • Main idea 2: There's a perception that as individuals age, their productivity decreases, and health issues might become more prevalent, impacting their ability to perform at work.
      • Supporting idea: One reason for the belief that older individuals may become less productive and face health issues is based on common stereotypes about aging. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: 
        • For instance, in certain workplaces, there might be assumptions that older employees might not adapt to technology as quickly or efficiently as younger colleagues, impacting their productivity. 
        • Additionally, some physical health issues associated with aging might be perceived as potentially limiting their ability to perform certain tasks effectively, although this might not hold true for all older individuals.

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