Giải đề"The adverse effect of sugar on health is well known to the public now. Some believe that the government should control the amount of sugar people consume. Others think that it is the responsibility of an individual to monitor ther sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS GENERAL WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích"Some people do not mind to spend their leisure time with their colleagues while some people prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a great idea to spend leisure time with your colleagues?"IELTS WRITING (kèm bài viết thi thật HS đạt 6.0), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Giải đề"The adverse effect of sugar on health is well known to the public now. Some believe that the government should control the amount of sugar people consume. Others think that it is the responsibility of an individual to monitor ther sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion." IELTS GENERAL WRITING TASK 2

The adverse effect of sugar on health is well known to the public now. Some believe that the government should control the amount of sugar people consume. Others think that it is the responsibility of an individual to monitor ther sugar intake. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Others think that it is the responsibility of an individual to monitor ther sugar intake
    • Main idea: Proponents of individual responsibility argue that people should be empowered to make their own choices regarding their diet. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • They emphasize the importance of education and personal accountability in making informed decisions about sugar intake. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • This perspective often encourages public awareness campaigns, nutritional education, and the promotion of healthier eating habits as ways to address the issue.
      • Example: 
        • The Change4Life Sugar Smart campaign in the UK, initiated in 2016, sought to heighten awareness of sugar content in common foods and beverages, advocating for healthier choices among families. 
        • This multifaceted campaign utilized diverse mediums like TV, radio, print, and digital advertising, offering a free Sugar Smart app enabling parents to scan product barcodes, revealing the sugar content, fostering informed decision-making.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm  Some believe that the government should control the amount of sugar people consume & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea: Controlling sugar intake through regulations, such as taxation on sugary products or setting limits on sugar content in food, can help curb health issues like obesity and diabetes at a societal level. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Government interventions, such as regulations or taxation, can create an environment that nudges individuals toward healthier choices. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
        • Such measures could effectively reduce sugar consumption across the population, promoting public health.
      • Example: In 2018, the UK introduced a sugar tax on soft drinks, aiming to reduce sugar intake and tackle childhood obesity. This tax levied higher charges on drinks with higher sugar content, encouraging both consumers and manufacturers to opt for healthier, lower sugar alternatives. As a result, some beverage companies reformulated their products to reduce sugar content, aligning with the health-driven market shift. 

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