Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn 🔥Giải đề"The diagram shows how to make jam from the fruit"IELTS WRITING TASK 1(Giải đề thi 7/3/2024)- Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó
I. Đề bài
The diagram shows how to make jam from the fruit

II. Kiến thức liên quan
IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:
III. Phân tích
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The diagram illustrates a step-by-step process (quy trình từng bước – a detailed, ordered set of actions) for producing jam from fruit, beginning with raw ingredients and ending with the final consumption stage (giai đoạn tiêu thụ cuối – when the product is eaten).
Initially, 4 kilograms of fruit are thoroughly washed (rửa kỹ – cleaned carefully) under running water. The clean fruit is then mashed using a hand-held masher (dụng cụ nghiền cầm tay – a manual tool used for crushing fruit) and transferred into a pot. This mixture is heated at a high temperature (nhiệt độ cao) for ten minutes with 1 cup of water, ¼ cup of sugar, and 2 tablespoons of peanuts added.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR
In the next heat-intensive phase (giai đoạn cần nhiệt độ cao – stage that involves high heat), 4 cups of water and 2 more cups of sugar are incorporated and boiled for half an hour. Afterward, the jam is poured into airtight containers (hộp kín khí – sealed jars that prevent air from entering) and left to sit with lids tightly closed for one day.
Finally, the jam reaches its ready-to-eat condition (trạng thái sẵn sàng để ăn) and is consumed, for instance, during family breakfast.
📝 New Vocabulary List
Step-by-step process (quy trình từng bước) – a series of actions done in a specific sequence
Synonyms: sequential procedure, ordered steps, progressive stages
Antonyms: random procedure, disorderly method, chaotic sequence
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “The diagram illustrates a step-by-step process for producing jam...”Final consumption stage (giai đoạn tiêu thụ cuối) – the last step where a product is used or eaten
Synonyms: end-use phase, final usage, utilization point
Antonyms: initial phase, production start, raw stage
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...ending with the final consumption stage.”Thoroughly washed (rửa kỹ) – cleaned very carefully
Synonyms: meticulously cleaned, scrubbed, rinsed well
Antonyms: lightly rinsed, unclean, neglected
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...fruit are thoroughly washed under running water.”Hand-held masher (dụng cụ nghiền cầm tay) – a tool held in the hand to mash ingredients
Synonyms: manual masher, kitchen crusher, fruit press
Antonyms: automatic blender, machine tool, electric mixer
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...mashed using a hand-held masher.”Heat-intensive phase (giai đoạn cần nhiệt độ cao) – a stage requiring prolonged heating
Synonyms: boiling stage, cooking phase, thermal step
Antonyms: cooling phase, freezing step, room-temperature process
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “In the next heat-intensive phase...”Airtight containers (hộp kín khí) – sealed jars that keep air out
Synonyms: sealed jars, vacuum-sealed containers, airtight jars
Antonyms: open container, loose lid jar, ventilated box
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...poured into airtight containers...”Ready-to-eat condition (trạng thái sẵn sàng để ăn) – the product is fully prepared and safe to consume
Synonyms: edible form, finished state, consumable condition
Antonyms: uncooked state, incomplete form, raw condition
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “...reaches its ready-to-eat condition...”
🔁 Advanced Grammar Structures & Analysis
Passive voice
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ“...fruit are thoroughly washed...”
→ Quả được rửa kỹ lưỡng
✅ Used to emphasize the process rather than the actor.
Reduced relative clause
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ“...mashed using a hand-held masher...” (instead of “which is mashed using...”)
→ Được nghiền bằng dụng cụ cầm tay
✅ Concise and academic structure.
Compound adjectives
“step-by-step process”, “heat-intensive phase”, “ready-to-eat condition”, “hand-held masher”, “airtight containers”
✅ These are typical of Band 8.0-level vocabulary, conveying precision and fluency.
Complex noun phrases
IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ“...final consumption stage during family breakfast”
→ Giai đoạn tiêu thụ cuối cùng trong bữa sáng gia đình
✅ Academic and information-rich phrases.
Sequencing with transitions
“Initially… In the next phase… Afterward… Finally…”
✅ Clearly shows chronological stages—vital in process writing.

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