Giải đề"The pie charts show the reasons for immigrants to a European country in 2009 and reasons for immigrants from a European country in 2009" IELTS WRITING TASK 1

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The pie charts show the reasons for immigrants to a European country in 2009 and reasons for immigrants from a European country in 2009

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  • Overall:
    • Accompanying family or loved ones was the primary incentive for many individuals relocating to a European country, whereas a specific job opportunity was the primary driver for immigrants from a European nation in 2009. 
    • Relatively few individuals cited no specific reason for their immigration to or from the European country.
  • Body 1: Viết pie số 1 
    • Accompanying family or loved ones constituted a quarter of the total, surpassing other reasons by 10%, followed closely by definite employment at 23%. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
    • Pursuit of a new job accounted for 15%, the same percentage as motivations for education and other miscellaneous reasons. 
    • Those immigrating without a clear motive represented 7% of the total population.
  • Body 2: Viết pie số 2
    • Definite employment surpassed accompanying family or loved ones as the predominant factor driving immigration from a European country, at 38%. 
    • This was followed by other miscellaneous reasons at 23%, which was 8% higher than accompanying family and 10% higher than job-seeking. 
    • Pursuit of education and lack of a specific motive to relocate to a European country constituted the smallest proportions, at 7% and 4%, respectively.

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