Giải đề"The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006." IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (Đề thi 13/1/2024)

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The table below shows the number of temporary migrant workers in four countries in 2003 and 2006 and the number of these workers per 1,000 people in these countries in 2006.

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  • Overall:
    • The total workforce increased across all surveyed countries during the examined period, consistently with the United States having the highest workforce numbers. 
    • New Zealand registered the highest concentration of workers per 1,000 residents in 2006.
  • Body 1: Viết về New Zealand + Australia 
    • Concerning the Oceanian countries, Australia's migrant workforce stood at 152,000 individuals in 2003, experiencing a significant increase to 219,000 by 2006, with a density slightly over 10 workers per 1,000 residents. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Meanwhile, New Zealand had the lowest migrant workforce among the surveyed nations for both years, starting at 65,000 and reaching 87,000, but exhibiting the highest concentration in 2006 with 21.1 workers per 1,000 people.
  • Body 2: Viết về  UK & US
    • Regarding the other countries, the United States documented the highest number of migrant workers at 577,000 in 2003, moderately rising to 678,000 by 2006, resulting in 2.3 workers per 1,000 people. 
    • Lastly, the United Kingdom had a considerably lower figure of 137,000 in 2003, nearly doubling by 2006, leading to 4.4 workers per 1,000 inhabitants.

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