Giải đề"The table below shows the result of a survey of patients who stayed in three different wards of a hospital. It shows what percentage of the patients replied ‘very good’ about various aspects of their hospital experience"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

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The table below shows the result of a survey of patients who stayed in three different wards of a hospital. It shows what percentage of the patients replied ‘very good’ about various aspects of their hospital experience

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

The bar chart compares the proportion (tỷ lệ phần trăm) of patients who rated their experience as ‘very good’ across three hospital wards—Holly, Maple, and Oak—based on four aspects: staff, waiting time, treatment quality, and aftercare.

Overall, Holly Ward outperformed (vượt trội hơn) the others in every category, while Maple Ward received the lowest scores (nhận điểm thấp nhất), particularly for aftercare.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

In terms of hospital staff, Holly achieved the highest approval rating at 85%, compared to 70% for Oak and just 55% for Maple. For waiting time, Holly again led at 75%, followed by Oak (60%) and Maple (55%). When it comes to quality of treatment, both Holly and Oak received strong ratings of 85% and 80% respectively, whereas Maple trailed at 70%.

The greatest difference was seen in aftercare service (dịch vụ hậu chăm sóc): 90% of Holly patients rated it as very good, while only 50% in Maple did so, and Oak scored 70%.

📘 New Vocabulary (with Vietnamese & English Definitions)

1. Proportion (tỷ lệ phần trăm) – the share or part of a whole

2. Outperformed (vượt trội hơn) – did better than others

3. Received the lowest scores (nhận điểm thấp nhất) – got the least favorable results

4. Aftercare service (dịch vụ hậu chăm sóc) – care provided after the initial treatment

5. Superior overall performance (hiệu suất tổng thể vượt trội) – significantly better in all areas

6. Underachieved (đạt kết quả kém) – performed below expectations

🔁 Synonyms & Antonyms

1. Outperformed

• Synonyms: exceeded, surpassed, outshone

• Antonyms: lagged behind, fell short, underperformed

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Holly Ward outperformed the others in every category."

2. Superior overall performance

• Synonyms: exceptional results, outstanding performance, remarkable achievement

• Antonyms: poor outcome, mediocre results, underwhelming showing

• IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Holly Ward showed superior overall performance."

🧠 Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Comparative with passive structure

   • “Holly achieved the highest approval rating at 85%, compared to 70% for Oak...”

   • → Holly đạt mức đánh giá cao nhất là 85%, so với 70% của Oak…

2. Reduced relative clause

   • “Patients who rated their experience as ‘very good’ → Patients rating their experience...”

   • → “Bệnh nhân đánh giá trải nghiệm của họ là ‘rất tốt’…”

3. Parallel structure in listing

   • “...based on four aspects: staff, waiting time, treatment quality, and aftercare.”

   • → Dựa trên bốn khía cạnh: nhân viên, thời gian chờ, chất lượng điều trị và chăm sóc sau điều trị.

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