Phân tích bài essay về Fast Food IELTS WRITING TASK 2
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1. Đề bài
SHOULD GOVERNMENT REGULATE THE FAST FOOD INDUSTRIES IN THE SAME WAY THAT REGULATES THE DRUG, ALCOHOL AND TOBACCO INDUSTRIES
2. Lưu ý đề này
Trước khi đặt bút vào viết, các em phải nhận ra cho được những điểm sau:
3. Hướng dẫn cách viết đề này
3.1. Hướng viết chung
3.2. Cách chia bố cục
3.2.1. Nếu không đồng ý với quan điểm đề cho
NẾU KHÔNG ĐỒNG Ý VỚI QUAN ĐIỂM ĐỀ BÀI LÀ NÊN CẤM FAST FOOD
Bài này muốn viết cho đúng phải viết theo bố cục sau:
3.2.2. Nếu đồng ý hoàn toàn với ý kiến đề bài
Nếu đồng ý hoàn toàn với việc chính phủ nên cấm fast food như các industries kia thì sẽ bố cục
4. Từng bước viết bài
In this day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on whether or not governments should strictly control fast food industries like the way they do with drug, alcohol and tobacco industries. I myself believe that fast food sector is not that negative to deserve these stringent regulations for these reasons below.
Đoạn thân bài 1 mẫu, trong đó câu in đậm là câu MAIN IDEA
Firstly, eating fast food is absolutely convenient for those who fail to have time to cook. This is true when today people do not have quality time with their family, let alone cooking food for themselves. In such case, those busy people just need to come over fast food restaurants for their quick meals or online order. Take myself as an example, I usually go for my favourite KFC restaurant when not having time to cook, which is both cost-effective and handy when food coming at my doorstep without any delivery cost.
Đoạn thân bài 2 mẫu, trong đó câu in đậm là câu MAIN IDEA
Another reason why I do think that fast food industries should not be banned as the other harmful sectors is that junk foods are not as dangerous to people’s health as drug, alcohol and tobacco. Too much fast food is likely to cause some diseases such as obesity and heart related diseases; however, abuse of drug, alcohol can not only make people addicted but also cause social evils such as crime, violence and addiction. For example, eating too much fast food can make teenagers themselves obese, however, drug use or addiction might drive users to commit crimes such as raping or killing other people for money. As a result, the government should keep drug, alcohol and tobacco industries under tight control rather than fast food sector.
For the reasons mentioned above, I believe that it is more beneficial for the government to manage the fast food industries in a less strict way than the drug, alcohol and tobacco industries.
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