Phân tích đề"It is shown that many criminals have a low level of education. Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate them in prison so that they can find a job after they leave prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ THI 30/9/2022)

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Bên cạnh phân tích đề thi thật IELTS WRITING TASK 2 dạng Advantages & Disadvantages, IELTS TUTOR Phân tích đề"It is shown that many criminals have a low level of education. Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate them in prison so that they can find a job after they leave prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (ĐỀ THI 30/9/2022)

I. Đề bài

It is shown that many criminals have a low level of education. Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate them in prison so that they can find a job after they leave prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

II. Từ vựng

        III. Phân tích

        IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

        • Cách trả lời dạng câu hỏi này đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé:
        • Nếu theo hướng totally agree với quan điểm đề cho là the best way to reduce crime is to educate them in prison so that they can find a job after they leave prison thì sẽ chia bố cục như sau:
        • Body 1: Lí do thứ 1 vì sao đồng ý với quan điểm đề cho 
          • Main idea: Learning will occupy their time in prison and consequently, they will have no time for negative thoughts   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Rules / laws & court IELTS
          • Supporting idea: 
            • Since they have plenty of time in jail, they can use it to learn a course or a skill and become educated, which will help them after they have served their sentence. 
            • These offenders’ minds will be less inclined to engage in illegal activities if they spend their free time learning.
          • Example: 
        • Body 2: Lí do thứ 2 vì sao đồng ý với quan điểm đề cho 
          • Main idea:  Employability skills and basic understanding of how to make money will help offenders gain confidence in their ability to become a good person and reintegrate with the society   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Crime, a crime hay Crimes và cách dùng trong tiếng anh
          • Supporting idea: 
            • After coming back home, the acquired knowledge gives them the confidence to face the world and a goal to achieve in life.
            • The lack of education amongst prisoners is the main cause behind the escalation in violent crimes. 
            • Prisoners can get a chance to learn and work while carrying out their sentences, which will also help them to sustain themselves after they’ve completed their term  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "murder" tiếng anh
          • Example: 

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