Phân tích bài essay về "In order to be successful in sport, some people think you have to be physically strong. Others say that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 18/01/2020)

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Bên cạnh phân tích đề thi thật IELTS WRITING TASK 2 dạng Advantages & Disadvantages, IELTS TUTOR Phân tích bài essay về "physical health & mental strength in sports" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 18/01/2020)

I. Đề bài

In order to be successful in sport, some people think you have to be physically strong. Others say that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

II. Từ vựng

TỪ VỰNG TOPIC SPORTS IELTS TUTOR đã hướng dẫn

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng bài này thuộc dạng Discuss both sides and give your own opinion trong đó giả sử nếu IELTS TUTOR cho rằng cả physical health & mental strength đều quan trọng như nhau thì sẽ phân đoạn thân bài như sau:
    • Intro câu 2 + conclusion nhấn mạnh cả physical health & mental strength đều quan trọng như nhau
    • Body 1: viết view 1: In order to be successful in sport, some people think you have to be physically strong
      • Main idea 1: Muscular strength and key skills such as stamina, flexibility and agility can enhance the ability to perform general sport skills such as jumping or sprinting in the majority of sports (HOẶC:  it is of uttermost importance for sports players to be physically fit as they need to conquer tough challenges in the majority of games). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Từ vựng Topic "skill" IELTS
        • Supporting idea: Without a strong physical body, and high level of coordination, people would not be able to perform to a high level
        • Example: Competitive swimmers or runners must have brute strength to adjust their pace during different stages of the game to maintain their position or take the lead (HOẶC:  in order to fight in a match of 90 minutes, football players definitely need to exert enormous strength and stamina). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "must-have" tiếng anh
      • Main idea 2: being in good physical condition ensures their continuity in athletic performance.
        • Supporting idea: physical toughness helps them avoid injuries during training or competition, or their sporting career would be ruined by injuries. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "avoid" tiếng anh
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: viết view 2: Others say that mental strength is more important
      • Main idea 1: Under the intense pressure of each match, only strong-minded sportspeople who remain calm during the game are able to maintain a conscious mindset to make breakthroughs in the games
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: maintaining composure whilst being surrounded by thousands of screaming fans when trying to kick the winning penalty kick in a football match would be extremely difficult, and this is where mental strength is highly important. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý cách dùng during, while, whilts, whereas, but, meanwhile
      • Main idea 2: Mental toughness encourages sportspeople to come up with most appropriate tactics and strategies to defeat their rivals (HOẶC: a strong mentality is a deciding factor in the outcomes of games)
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 

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