Phân tích & Sửa đề"In many cities, planners have separated schools, homes, shops, offices in specific areas which were widely separated from each other. Do you think advantages of this policy outweigh disadvantages to the city residents?"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích & Sửa đề"In many cities, planners have separated schools, homes, shops, offices in specific areas which were widely separated from each other"IELTS WRITING TASK 1

I. Đề bài

In many cities, planners have separated schools, homes, shops, offices in specific areas which were widely separated from each other. Do you think advantages of this policy outweigh disadvantages to the city residents?

HOẶC:

In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices, and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng outweigh nếu target dưới 7.0 thì có thể viết theo hướng TOTALLY bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng ADVANTAGES > DISADVANTAGES)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao ADVANTAGES > DISADVANTAGES
      • Main idea: A city arranged on the basis of clearly-defined functional areas can make people’s life much easier and more efficient   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic "Study" IELTS
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: if all government offices are located in the same area,they will save tremendous amount of time when they need to get their bureaucratic paperwork completed (HOẶC: When we want to buy a specific model of computer, for example, we can simply visit the city’s hi-tech market)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "locate" tiếng anh
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao ADVANTAGES > DISADVANTAGES
      • Main idea: it is convenient for government to manage the areas when the areas are built for some specific purpose separately.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "convenience" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: The educational authorities can be established in the area where the schools are located. 

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