Phân tích "In many countries, the number of animals and plants are declining. Why do you think is it happening? How to solve this issue?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In many countries, the number of animals and plants are declining. Why do you think is it happening? How to solve this issue?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

In many countries, the number of animals and plants are declining. Why do you think is it happening? How to solve this issue?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Dạng 2 question thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
      • Main idea 1: One of the main causes of this phenomenon is deforestation. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • The clearing of forests for the development of civilizations has resulted in the destruction of habitats for many animals and the depletion of their food supply. 
          • Deforestation has resulted in the extinction of many of them.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Another major contributing factor is climate change.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Global warming has led to an increase in the Earth’s temperature at a few places and fall at other places. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "temperature" tiếng anh
          • With the rise in the earth's temperature due to an increase in carbon emissions, numerous plants, and animals are unable to adapt to their new environmental conditions. 
        • Example: 
          • For instance, a subtle rise in sea water temperature can destroy planktons which are the primary food source of certain sea creatures. 
          • Animals such as the polar bear and snow leopard are endangered species on the verge of extinction. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "species" tiếng anh 
      • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm các ideas khác: 
        • Main idea: Since the dawn of the twentieth century, humans have exploited natural resources for economic progress. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng "HUMAN" & "HUMANS" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea:
          • Huge swathes of trees have been cleared to construct cities, collect raw material for various industries, and build factories and dams. 
        • Example: 
          • Such large scale residential and commercial projects have not only led to the elimination of several animal and plant species but also a reduction in the population of many others such as the Tiger and Rhinoceros. >> IELTS TTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "population" 
          • Air, water, and land pollution caused by human activities have led to a reduction in the number of house sparrows that were a common sight a few years ago.
    • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
      • Main idea 1: the government and responsible authorities should regulate the clearing of land, and promote reforestation. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý CÁCH PARAPHRASE "THE GOVERNMENT" IELTS
        • Supporting idea: This should result in an improvement in the ecosystem and wild life.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: the countries with the most carbon emissions should undertake efforts to curb them for the greater good >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng EMISSIONS / EMISSION tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: the effects of man driven climate change on the ecosystem would be mitigated.
        • Example: 
    • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm ideas khác:
      • Main idea: Protecting and preserving animal and plant species requires close coordination of individuals, institutions, private companies, and governments. 
      • Supporting idea: While government policy and programs for reducing deforestation, promoting afforestation, and regulating vehicular pollution are important, companies also need to act environmentally responsible by following green practices. Individuals also should abandon any activity that has a high carbon footprint.

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