Phân tích"In many places, people’s lifestyle is changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of those developments outweigh the disadvantages? " IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Bài mẫu, kèm dịch & giải thích từ vựng & cấu trúc grammar khó​ (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In many places, people’s lifestyle is changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of those developments outweigh the disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

In many places, people’s lifestyle is changing rapidly, and this affects family relationships. Do you think the advantages of those developments outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: technologies separates family members and deter them from connecting with each other in a meaningful way.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "prevent" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea:  Some people think that they are with their children, but the fact is that they just stay in one place with their children while different people do different things in the same house
      • Example: if family members become too immersed in using their devices for individual recreational purposes, like checking their social media accounts or browsing their favourite websites, they may neglect their relationships with other family members. 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: time with their children or parents or spouses is so scarce (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The amount of quality time that a family spends together is likely to reduce, negatively impacting family relations)
      • Supporting idea: With the fast pace of life combined with mounting pressure, people are always busy   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "busy" tiếng anh
      • Example: 
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: this phenomenon does help people to connect each other conveniently and fast
        • Supporting idea: Modern people across national borders can easily keep in touch with their family members via modern internet applications (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt: thanks to developments in technology, devices such as smartphones, tablets and laptop computers have not only become an indispensable part of our lives but have also helped to make communicating with our friends and families much easier, particularly between those who are separated by long distances)  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "Particularly" tiếng anh 
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: The modern lifestyle surely encourages freedom and independence among people of the same family
        • Supporting idea: Most young people now bear less pressure from their parents when it comes to making decision with regard to their personal lives.
        • Example: Most parents now allow kids to speak their mind and choose their job based on their own volitions
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: technologies separates family members and deter them from connecting with each other in a meaningful way.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "separate" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea:  Some people think that they are with their children, but the fact is that they just stay in one place with their children while different people do different things in the same house
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: time with their children or parents or spouses is so scarce (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: people are becoming more and more career-oriented and are subsequently losing the balance between work and family life)
        • Supporting idea: 
          • With the fast pace of life combined with mounting pressure, people are always busy
          • It has become more common that family members are less available at home, even outside of official working time, leading to weakened family interactions 
        • Example: 
    • Conclusion: paraphrase intro câu 2 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In recent years, rapid-paced (nhịp độ nhanh - happening very quickly) lifestyles and technological advancements have transformed how people live, significantly influencing family bonds. While some argue that these changes bring families closer, others believe that they create a growing divide (khoảng cách ngày càng lớn - increasing separation) among family members. In my opinion, although this phenomenon offers certain conveniences, its drawbacks are equally pronounced.

On the one hand, modern lifestyles have undeniably facilitated seamless communication (giao tiếp liền mạch - smooth and uninterrupted interaction) among family members. With the advent of smartphones and video-calling platforms, individuals can now effortlessly maintain contact with their loved ones, regardless of geographical barriers. For instance, expatriates living thousands of miles away can still participate in family gatherings virtually, ensuring they remain a part of significant moments. Additionally, contemporary lifestyles promote a sense of self-sufficiency (tự chủ - the ability to take care of oneself without help from others) and personal autonomy (quyền tự chủ cá nhân - the right to make one's own decisions), as family members are more independent and capable of managing their own lives effectively.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

On the other hand, the same technologies that enable virtual connection often lead to emotional detachment (sự xa cách cảm xúc - a lack of emotional connection) within households. Many people mistakenly believe they are spending quality time with their families simply by being in the same room, yet each member is engrossed in their own device. For example, children might be playing video games while parents scroll through social media, resulting in fragmented interactions (tương tác rời rạc - disconnected and incomplete communication). Moreover, the hectic nature (tính chất bận rộn - busy and chaotic nature) of modern life means that shared moments are increasingly rare. With demanding work schedules and social obligations, family members often struggle to find time to engage meaningfully with one another, weakening familial bonds over time.

In conclusion, although the digitally connected (kết nối kỹ thuật số - connected through digital means) lifestyle provides convenience and independence, its negative impact on family relationships is equally evident. Therefore, I believe the benefits and drawbacks of this trend are balanced in their influence on family dynamics.

New Vocabulary & Explanations:

1. rapid-paced (nhịp độ nhanh - happening very quickly)

   • Synonyms: fast-paced, quick-moving, swift

   • Antonyms: slow-paced, sluggish, leisurely

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The rapid-paced lifestyle in cities often leaves little time for family gatherings.

2. growing divide (khoảng cách ngày càng lớn - increasing separation)

   • Synonyms: widening gap, increasing separation, expanding chasm

   • Antonyms: narrowing gap, shrinking divide, closing distance

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The growing divide between family members is evident when technology takes priority over conversation.

3. seamless communication (giao tiếp liền mạch - smooth and uninterrupted interaction)

   • Synonyms: unbroken communication, smooth interaction, fluid connection

   • Antonyms: disrupted communication, broken interaction, fragmented connection

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Modern technology allows for seamless communication among family members, even when they are miles apart.

4. self-sufficiency (tự chủ - the ability to take care of oneself without help from others)

   • Synonyms: independence, autonomy, self-reliance

   • Antonyms: dependence, reliance, helplessness

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The modern lifestyle promotes self-sufficiency, encouraging people to make their own decisions.

5. personal autonomy (quyền tự chủ cá nhân - the right to make one's own decisions)

   • Synonyms: individual freedom, self-determination, independence

   • Antonyms: control, restriction, dependency

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Many young people enjoy greater personal autonomy in their daily lives than in the past.

6. emotional detachment (sự xa cách cảm xúc - a lack of emotional connection)

   • Synonyms: emotional disconnection, apathy, unattachment

   • Antonyms: emotional closeness, empathy, attachment

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Emotional detachment is often the result of excessive screen time within families.

7. fragmented interactions (tương tác rời rạc - disconnected and incomplete communication)

   • Synonyms: broken communication, disjointed interaction, scattered contact

   • Antonyms: cohesive interaction, fluid communication, seamless connection

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Fragmented interactions become commonplace when family members prioritize their devices over conversation.

8. hectic nature (tính chất bận rộn - busy and chaotic nature)

   • Synonyms: busy nature, fast-paced environment, chaotic lifestyle

   • Antonyms: calm environment, relaxed nature, peaceful lifestyle

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: The hectic nature of modern life makes it difficult for families to spend quality time together.

9. digitally connected (kết nối kỹ thuật số - connected through digital means)

   • Synonyms: technologically linked, online-connected, virtually connected

   • Antonyms: offline, disconnected, unlinked

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: Families are more digitally connected than ever before, yet physical interactions are dwindling.

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