Phân tích "In some countries people are not taking care of their elderly relatives, some believe elderly people should live in nursing homes where trained professionals care for the elderly, others think they should live with the younger family members. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

· Writing,Task 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In some countries people are not taking care of their elderly relatives, some believe elderly people should live in nursing homes where trained professionals care for the elderly, others think they should live with the younger family members. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

In some countries people are not taking care of their elderly relatives, some believe elderly people should live in nursing homes where trained professionals care for the elderly, others think they should live with the younger family members. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

  • Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm some believe elderly people should live in nursing homes where trained professionals care for the elderly
      • Main idea: Nursing homes provide specialized care and support for the elderly. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Trained professionals can cater to their specific needs, ensuring their safety, health, and well-being. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "cater" 
          • Nursing homes are equipped with facilities and resources to address medical conditions, offer social activities, and create a sense of community among residents.
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm others think they should live with the younger family members & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
      • Main idea 1: Living together fosters a strong sense of familial bonds, mutual support, and emotional connection. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • They can experience the warmth of daily interactions, engage in shared activities, and benefit from emotional support, companionship, and love. 
          • The presence of younger family members can help combat feelings of loneliness and isolation that often accompany aging.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Having elderly relatives at home allows for shared experiences, knowledge transfer, and the preservation of family traditions. >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Word form của "preserve" 
        • Supporting idea: Living with younger family members can create a sense of purpose and fulfillment for the elderly, as they contribute their wisdom and experiences while receiving care and affection in return.
        • Example: 
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Các khóa học IELTS online 1 kèm 1 - 100% cam kết đạt target 6.0 - 7.0 - 8.0