Phân tích "It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

I. Đề bài

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

You have been asked to write about the following topic.

It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be.
Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together.
Include any relevant examples from your experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

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  • Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
      • Main idea 1: technologies separates family members and deter them from connecting with each other in a meaningful way.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "prevent" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea:  Some people think that they are with their children, but the fact is that they just stay in one place with their children while different people do different things in the same house
        • Example: if family members become too immersed in using their devices for individual recreational purposes, like checking their social media accounts or browsing their favourite websites, they may neglect their relationships with other family members. 
      • Main idea 2: time with their children or parents or spouses is so scarce (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The amount of quality time that a family spends together is likely to reduce, negatively impacting family relations)
        • Supporting idea: With the fast pace of life combined with mounting pressure, people are always busy   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "busy" tiếng anh
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
      • Main idea 1: One way to do this is by setting house screen rules that everyone must follow such as no devices at the dinner table or a designated amount of screen-free family time. 
        • Supporting idea: If kids grow up in a home where devices are only used occasionally, they may pick up on these habits and naturally limit their own screen time.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  TỪ VỰNG TOPIC "TRẺ EM (CHILDREN/KIDS)
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: Another way to forge better ties with our near and dear ones is to spend more time with them.
        • Supporting idea:
          • Everyone in the family should feel empowered to share good news as well as bad and receive a loving response.  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: Family meetings are a good time for everyone to check in with each other, air grievances, or discuss future plans)
          • The goal is for everyone in the family to rejoice together when things go well, and commiserate when things do not go as planned.    >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Family (child education, child birth...) IELTS
          • When families feel supported, getting through hard times becomes much easier
        • Example: 

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