Giải đề"Large shopping malls are replacing small shops.Do you think it is a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING (Kèm bài sửa HS IELTS TUTOR)

Bên cạnh phân tích kĩ càng đề thi IELTS GENERAL TASK 2 ngày 4/8/2020, kèm bài sửa cho hs đi thi thật, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích & sửa đề"Large shopping malls are replacing small shops.Do you think it is a positive or negative development?"IELTS WRITING

Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Nếu theo hướng TOTALLY tức là positive development (large shopping malls are replacing small shops là tốt) thì có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao nó là positive development 
    • Main idea: mega shopping malls save shoppers’ valuable time   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng & ideas topic "time & time management" IELTS
    • Supporting idea: large shopping complexes bring different vendors under a single roof and offer a spectrum of products (hoặc they provide a single platform to customers where they can purchase everything they need, ranging from groceries to clothing and more)
    • Example: My uncle - John, a busy professional, saved valuable time by shopping at a mega shopping mall, conveniently finding both a new suit for his job interview and groceries in one location, streamlining his errands and reducing hassle.

  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao nó là positive development
    • Main idea: improve people's shopping experience   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "improve" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: large shopping malls have various entertainment facilities including cinema halls, food court, children's play zone… 
    • Example: In the present, mega shopping malls have revolutionized shopping, offering an enjoyable and memorable experience with diverse entertainment facilities, making it convenient for families, dates, and social outings all in one place.

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