Phân tích "Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do? Or do you feel children have enough education at school?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do? Or do you feel children have enough education at school?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do? Or do you feel children have enough education at school?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do? 
    • Main idea 1: Extra classes can lead to burnout and stress, particularly if a child is already overburdened with schoolwork and other activities. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích phrasal verb: lead to sth
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: They may limit a child's free time and opportunities for relaxation and play.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Children may become too focused on academic success at the expense of other important aspects of their development, such as social skills and emotional wellbeing.
        • Children may miss out on important family time and bonding opportunities.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 Or do you feel children have enough education at school? - ENOUGH
    • Main idea: Children receive a significant amount of education at school, which is designed to provide them with a well-rounded education that prepares them for their future academic and professional pursuits. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "education" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: It's important to recognise that children already receive a significant amount of education at school, and it's important to find a healthy balance between academic pursuits and other important aspects of a child's development, such as social skills, emotional wellbeing, and free time for play and exploration.

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