Giải đề"Many young people change their jobs and careers. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích đề"Many young people change their jobs and careers. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?"

Many young people change their jobs and careers. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 câu  hỏi  có  thể  bố  cục  bài  như  sau:
  • Body 1: Trả  lời  câu  hỏi  What are the reasons for this?
    • Main idea 1: Young people are still seeking their passions.  >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Hobbies / Interests tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • As many are unclear about their career path, they try out jobs to discover what they would enjoy pursuing professionally. 
        • Trying out different jobs can provide individuals with valuable experience, help them identify their strengths and weaknesses, and allow them to explore their interests and passions. 
        • These insights can inform their career decisions and help them find fulfilling work.
      • Example: 
        • For example, if someone is unsure whether they want to pursue a career in marketing or finance, they may take on internships or entry-level positions in both fields to gain a better understanding of what each entails. Through these experiences, they can learn new skills, develop their professional network, and gain insight into the day-to-day responsibilities of different roles.     >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ"doubtful"tiếng anh
        • For instance, someone who has worked in customer service, sales, and project management may discover that they excel at organizing tasks and working with others, but struggle with technical tasks. This self-awareness can help them make more informed decisions about their career path and identify areas where they need to improve.
        • For example, someone who has always been interested in event planning may take on part-time or volunteer work in that field to gain experience and determine if it is something they want to pursue professionally.
    • Main  idea  2: Lower job satisfaction is the primary cause that leads youngsters to change work frequently     >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: 
        • If they are dissatisfied with a given position, young people will find another job that better suits them 
        • Young people today tend to prioritize job satisfaction and work-life balance over job security and stability. 
        • They are more likely to switch jobs if they feel that their current position does not align with their values, interests, or career goals. 
      • Example: For example, a recent college graduate who starts a job in finance but realizes they are not interested in that field may switch to a job in marketing or technology to explore different options.
  • Body  2: Trả  lời câu hỏi Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
    • Nếu theo quan điểm ADVANTAGES  >  DISADVANTAGES  thì  bố  cục :
      • Main idea 1: Lí  do  số 1 vì  sao ADVANTAGES  >  DISADVANTAGES: Young people may be equipped with a diverse skill set.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng danh từ "equipment"tiếng anh
        • Supporting  idea: As different jobs utilize different knowledge bases, young people often find it advantageous to acquire a wide-ranging variety of professional skills >>In the future when a new job is offered to them, youths will be better prepared for the work entailed in this position.    
      • Main idea 2: Lí  do  số 2 vì  sao ADVANTAGES  >  DISADVANTAGES: By working in different jobs, young people can gain exposure to new industries and technologies, and expand their knowledge and expertise. 
        • Supporting idea: 

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