Phân tích"Nowadays, many people cannot read or write. What problems does this cause? What measure can governments take to solve these problems?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Nowadays, many people cannot read or write. What problems does this cause? What measure can governments take to solve these problems?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Nowadays, many people cannot read or write. What problems does this cause? What measure can governments take to solve these problems?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: illiterate people may earn less money which will decrease the country’s development.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Among nations, countries with higher literacy invariably have higher per capita income. 
        • There is a positive, exponential relationship between literacy rate and GDP per capita. 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: illiteracy brings about medical diseases and poor health.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For instance, illiterates may not understand what HIV is or how it can be prevented.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: The government conducts various scholarship examinations and provides school uniform, textbooks and stationery in order to encourage students and adults to take up studying.
      • Supporting idea: From after-school programs to after-work programs and everything in-between, by removing barriers to education (which may include cost), more people can develop the skills they need. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "education" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: By creating school supports, we can help children who may be illiterate become literate adults one day >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "adult" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: Early recognition of learning difficulties or disabilities can help teachers and administrators assist children who may struggle with literacy.
      • Example: 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In the modern world, the prevalence (sự phổ biến, sự thịnh hành) of illiteracy continues to pose significant challenges for individuals and societies alike. The inability to read or write not only restricts personal opportunities but also undermines (làm suy yếu, phá hoại) national progress.

One of the most serious consequences of illiteracy is its negative impact on economic prosperity (sự thịnh vượng, giàu có). Illiterate individuals often secure only low-paying jobs, which limits their earning potential and, in turn, slows down the country’s socio-economic (thuộc về xã hội và kinh tế) development. This is evident in the fact that nations with higher literacy rates consistently enjoy higher per capita incomes, demonstrating the exponential (tăng nhanh, cấp số mũ) relationship between education and GDP growth. Furthermore, illiteracy can exacerbate public health issues, as those unable to read may struggle to understand medical instructions or awareness campaigns. For example, people without basic literacy skills may fail to grasp how HIV spreads or how it can be prevented, leading to avoidable illnesses and higher healthcare costs for society.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

To address these issues, governments can implement comprehensive measures to expand access to education. Offering scholarship schemes (chương trình học bổng), free school uniforms, textbooks, and stationery can motivate children and adults to return to learning. Removing financial barriers through after-school or after-work programs enables more individuals to acquire essential skills. Moreover, creating robust (mạnh mẽ, vững chắc) school support systems is crucial for early identification of learning difficulties. By intervening promptly, educators can ensure that struggling students develop literacy skills, ultimately transforming them into productive (có năng suất, hiệu quả) and self-reliant adults.

In conclusion, illiteracy hinders both personal and national advancement, but targeted government initiatives can play a pivotal role in eradicating this persistent problem.

New Vocabulary with Definitions

1. prevalence (sự phổ biến, sự thịnh hành) – Synonyms: widespreadness, pervasiveness, frequency / Antonyms: rarity, infrequency, uniqueness
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "the prevalence of illiteracy continues to pose significant challenges"

2. undermines (làm suy yếu, phá hoại) – Synonyms: weakens, sabotages, erodes / Antonyms: strengthens, fortifies, bolsters
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "not only restricts personal opportunities but also undermines national progress"

3. economic prosperity (sự thịnh vượng, giàu có) – Synonyms: affluence, wealth, success / Antonyms: poverty, hardship, destitution
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "its negative impact on economic prosperity"

4. socio-economic (thuộc về xã hội và kinh tế) – Synonyms: social and economic, community-financial, demographic-economic / Antonyms: purely economic, purely social, cultural-only
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "slows down the country’s socio-economic development"

5. exponential (tăng nhanh, cấp số mũ) – Synonyms: rapid, accelerating, geometric / Antonyms: slow, gradual, decelerating
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "demonstrating the exponential relationship between education and GDP growth"

6. scholarship schemes (chương trình học bổng) – Synonyms: grant programs, bursary plans, financial aid packages / Antonyms: tuition fees, educational costs, pay-to-learn
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "Offering scholarship schemes, free school uniforms..."

7. robust (mạnh mẽ, vững chắc) – Synonyms: strong, solid, resilient / Antonyms: weak, fragile, unstable
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "creating robust school support systems"

8. productive (có năng suất, hiệu quả) – Synonyms: efficient, fruitful, effective / Antonyms: unproductive, idle, inefficient
   IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "transforming them into productive and self-reliant adults"

Difficult Grammar Structures from the Essay

1. "The inability to read or write not only restricts personal opportunities but also undermines national progress."

   • Structure: not only ... but also – nhấn mạnh 2 vế quan trọng song song.

   • Vietnamese: "Việc không biết đọc hay viết không chỉ hạn chế cơ hội cá nhân mà còn làm suy yếu sự phát triển quốc gia."

2. "This is evident in the fact that nations with higher literacy rates consistently enjoy higher per capita incomes, demonstrating the exponential relationship between education and GDP growth."

   • Structure: This is evident in the fact that... – dùng để chứng minh, dẫn chứng.

   • Vietnamese: "Điều này thể hiện rõ ở chỗ các quốc gia có tỷ lệ biết chữ cao thường có thu nhập bình quân đầu người cao hơn, cho thấy mối quan hệ tăng nhanh giữa giáo dục và tăng trưởng GDP."

3. "By intervening promptly, educators can ensure that struggling students develop literacy skills, ultimately transforming them into productive and self-reliant adults."

   • Structure: By + V-ing, S + can + V – diễn tả cách thức đạt được mục tiêu.

   • Vietnamese: "Bằng cách can thiệp kịp thời, các nhà giáo dục có thể đảm bảo rằng học sinh gặp khó khăn sẽ phát triển kỹ năng đọc viết, cuối cùng biến họ thành những người trưởng thành năng suất và tự lập."

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