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Phân tích "Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study in foreign countries. While studying abroad has benefits for many students, it may not be beneficial to all. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages or not" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

March 18, 2023

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study in foreign countries. While studying abroad has benefits for many students, it may not be beneficial to all. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages or not" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

I. Đề bài

Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study in foreign countries. While studying abroad has benefits for many students, it may not be beneficial to all. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages or not?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

  • Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
  • Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
    • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (advantages>disadvantages)
      • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
        • Main idea: Studying abroad allows students to immerse themselves in new cultures, customs, and ways of life, which can broaden their perspectives and help them develop a more nuanced understanding of the world >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"perspective"tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
      • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao advantages>disadvantages
        • Main idea: Studying abroad can be a challenging and transformative experience that helps students develop independence, resilience, and adaptability.
        • Supporting idea:
        • Example: 
    • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
      • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
      • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
        • Main idea 1: Studying abroad allows students to immerse themselves in new cultures, customs, and ways of life, which can broaden their perspectives and help them develop a more nuanced understanding of the world >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "immerse" tiếng anh
          • Supporting idea:
          • Example: 
        • Main idea 2: Studying abroad can be a challenging and transformative experience that helps students develop independence, resilience, and adaptability.
          • Supporting idea:
          • Example: 
      • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
        • Main idea 1: Studying abroad can be expensive, and students may face additional costs for travel, housing, and living expenses >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"cost"tiếng anh
          • Supporting idea:
          • Example: 
        • Main idea 2: Adapting to a new culture and way of life can be challenging and overwhelming, and students may experience culture shock as they adjust to their new surroundings.
          • Supporting idea:
          • Example: 

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