Phân tích "All the university students should do voluntary work in their own time to help local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 20/4/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "All the university students should do voluntary work in their own time to help local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2(Đề thi IELTS 20/4/2024)

All the university students should do voluntary work in their own time to help local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Voluntary work fosters a sense of social responsibility among students, encouraging them to contribute positively to the welfare of their communities.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Voluntary work exposes students to the real-life needs and challenges faced by individuals and groups within their communities. >> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
        • By actively participating in addressing these needs, students develop a deeper understanding of social issues and the importance of collective action in creating positive change.
      • Example: A 2019 study published in the Journal of Youth and Adolescence found that volunteering exposes young people to community needs, enhances empathy, and motivates collective action, thus fostering social responsibility and empowering them to contribute positively to their communities' well-being.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Volunteering offers valuable opportunities for personal growth and development. 
      • Supporting idea: It allows students to gain practical skills, enhance their interpersonal abilities, and broaden their perspectives.
      • Example: 
        • My friend - Michael's decision to volunteer at a local hospital enabled him to gain practical skills by assisting nurses with administrative tasks, while also enhancing his interpersonal abilities through interactions with diverse patients and staff
        • This experience highlights how volunteering fosters personal growth by providing practical experience, honing social skills, and exposing individuals to new ideas and career paths.

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

Many people argue that all university students should engage in voluntary work to contribute to their local communities. I totally agree with this view since volunteering not only cultivates (nuôi dưỡng – to develop or improve through care and effort) social responsibility but also promotes personal growth (sự phát triển cá nhân – the process of improving self-awareness, knowledge, and skills) and self-development (tự hoàn thiện bản thân – the act of improving one’s abilities and potential).

Firstly, voluntary work fosters (thúc đẩy – to encourage the development of something) a strong sense of social responsibility (trách nhiệm xã hội – a moral obligation to act for the benefit of society) among students, motivating them to make constructive contributions (đóng góp tích cực – positive actions that improve a situation) to their communities. By taking part in community projects, students are exposed to (tiếp xúc với – to experience or encounter something) the real-life struggles of underprivileged people. This hands-on involvement allows them to develop empathy (sự đồng cảm – the ability to understand and share another’s feelings) and appreciate the value of collective action (hành động tập thể – the joint effort by a group to achieve a common goal). For instance, a 2019 study published in the Journal of Youth and Adolescence revealed that volunteering significantly enhances young people’s empathy, teamwork, and moral awareness, helping them become socially conscious (ý thức xã hội – aware of and concerned about social issues) individuals.>> Form đăng kí giải đề thi thật IELTS 4 kĩ năng kèm bài giải bộ đề 100 đề PART 2 IELTS SPEAKING quý đang thi (update hàng tuần) từ IELTS TUTOR

Secondly, volunteering provides students with invaluable (vô giá – extremely useful) opportunities for personal and professional development. It equips them with transferable skills (kỹ năng có thể áp dụng – abilities that can be used in different situations) such as leadership, teamwork, and communication. For example, my friend Michael volunteered at a local hospital, where he learned administrative procedures (thủ tục hành chính – formal processes involved in running an organization) and improved his interpersonal skills through interactions with patients and staff. This experience not only broadened his horizons (mở rộng tầm nhìn – to increase knowledge and understanding) but also gave him a clearer sense of career direction.

In conclusion, voluntary work should indeed be an essential part of university life, as it benefits both students and the community by fostering responsibility, compassion, and essential life skills.

⚙️ Difficult Grammar Structures & Explanations (with Vietnamese translation)

1. “By taking part in community projects, students are exposed to the real-life struggles of underprivileged people.”
   → Complex sentence with “By + V-ing” structure showing cause and effect.
   → Dịch: Bằng cách tham gia vào các dự án cộng đồng, sinh viên được tiếp xúc với những khó khăn thực tế của người kém may mắn.

2. “This hands-on involvement allows them to develop empathy and appreciate the value of collective action.”
   → Compound predicate: two verbs share one subject for fluency.
   → Dịch: Sự tham gia trực tiếp này giúp họ phát triển sự đồng cảm và trân trọng giá trị của hành động tập thể.

3. “Volunteering provides students with invaluable opportunities for personal and professional development.”
   → Causative and parallel structure with “for + N and N” for rhythm.
   → Dịch: Công việc tình nguyện mang lại cho sinh viên những cơ hội vô giá để phát triển cá nhân và nghề nghiệp.

4. “This experience not only broadened his horizons but also gave him a clearer sense of career direction.”
   → Not only... but also inversion adds emphasis.
   → Dịch: Trải nghiệm này không chỉ mở rộng tầm nhìn của anh ấy mà còn giúp anh xác định rõ hơn hướng đi nghề nghiệp.

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