Phân tích "As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh its disadvantages for the environment?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích & Sửa đề "Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Does the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?" (ngày21/11/2020), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích ''As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh its disadvantages for the environment?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh its disadvantages for the environment?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: The increase of car ownership has a negative impact on traffic congestion. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • As more people buy cars, the number of vehicles on the road increases, leading to traffic jams and longer commuting times. 
        • This not only wastes valuable time for individuals but also has economic consequences as it can lead to a decrease in productivity and higher transportation costs.
      • Example: For example, in Vietnam, rush hour traffic can become incredibly congested due to the large number of cars on the road, which can lead to long commutes and increased stress for drivers
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: It also causes the more serious air pollution as more waste gases from cars will be emitted. >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý Paraphrase "air pollution" (Diễn đạt "ô nhiễm không khí")
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The emission of harmful gases such as carbon monoxide and nitrogen oxide from vehicles contributes to the deterioration of air quality, which can have serious health consequences, especially for vulnerable groups such as children and the elderly. 
        • The use of fossil fuels, which is the primary source of energy for cars, contributes to climate change, which is one of the biggest challenges facing our planet.
      • Example: According to a study by the European Environment Agency, road transport is responsible for over 70% of the total carbon monoxide emissions, which is a major air pollutant, in Europe.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: a car has given to the owner the freedom of movement.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • This means that more people can travel for the ease of transportation, with no time wasting for taking the bus or train.
          • Families can travel together more easily, especially when there are elderly or disabled members who might find public transport uncomfortable to use.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: The prevalence of car owners creates more economic benefits
        • Supporting idea: millions of job opportunities are provided to serve automobile travellers such as working at filling stations or garages, and governments have promoted the automobile manufacturing industry to boost the local economy.
        • Example: 
      • IELTS TUTOR gợi ý thêm ý khác: Purchasing a car is an advantage to people in case of extreme exigencies such as taking a family member to the hospital without wasting time to arrange for a taxi and even they do not need to depend on neighbours to borrow their car.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: The increase of car ownership has a negative impact on traffic congestion. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • As more people buy cars, the number of vehicles on the road increases, leading to traffic jams and longer commuting times. 
          • This not only wastes valuable time for individuals but also has economic consequences as it can lead to a decrease in productivity and higher transportation costs.
        • Example: For example, in Vietnam, rush hour traffic can become incredibly congested due to the large number of cars on the road, which can lead to long commutes and increased stress for drivers
      • Main idea 2:  it also causes the more serious air pollution as more waste gases from cars will be emitted. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh 
        • Supporting idea:
          • The emission of harmful gases such as carbon monoxide and nitrogen oxide from vehicles contributes to the deterioration of air quality, which can have serious health consequences, especially for vulnerable groups such as children and the elderly. 
          • The use of fossil fuels, which is the primary source of energy for cars, contributes to climate change, which is one of the biggest challenges facing our planet.
        • Example: According to a study by the European Environment Agency, road transport is responsible for over 70% of the total carbon monoxide emissions, which is a major air pollutant, in Europe.

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