Phân tích"Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 21/3/2020 & 6/4/2024)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 21/3/2020)

Attending a live performance (for example, a play, concert, or sporting event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (Đề thi 21/3/2020)

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: spectators can feel the euphoria of watching their favourite celebrities directly on the spot >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng "feel like + sth/ving"
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Being a part of the cheering crowd, live attendees can enjoy their passion to the fullest, which evokes far more excitement and amusement than any recorded versions do. 
        • It allows the audience to truly immerse in every moment with all the dances, cheers, applause, and a sense of community >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng topic "community" 
      • Example: For example, going to a football match is not only watching players and goals but also being a part of the cheering crowd to warm the environment, and this eagerness to be a part of the spectacle draws me to the stadium quite often.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: attending a show in person is the only chance for die-hard fans to interact and show their appreciation  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: attending live performances gives the audience a chance to have personal interactions with their favorite artists or athletes)
      • Supporting idea: They can even have a chance to interact with people on stage and become an actual part of the performance >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng danh từ "performance"
      • Example: Experiencing a Beyoncé concert firsthand immerses die-hard fans in a dynamic atmosphere where live music, captivating visuals, and collective excitement amplify their energy, fostering a deeper connection with Beyoncé's artistry, while personal interactions like singing along on stage or receiving a high five transform them from passive observers to active participants, culminating in an unforgettable memory.
         

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