Phân tích "Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Kèm bài mẫu + giải thích vocab

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Write about the following topic.

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

You should write at least 250 words.

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• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.
    • Main idea: Sports facilities provide suitable spaces and equipment for people to exercise. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "provide" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: The increasing popularity of gym classes or sports clubs gives people more chances to improve their health.
      • Example: For example by installing exercise equipment in parks as my local council has done. This has the added benefit that parents and children often use them together just for fun, which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Increasing the provision of sports amenities would have little impact on public health.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Most health problems do not stem from a lack of opportunities, but from a lack of motivation.
        • Many people who paid for an annual gym membership failed to go entirely after just one month. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "after" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: It is more important to educate citizens about basic health awareness. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • A public awareness campaign about the dangers a sedentary lifestyle can have on one’s fitness would affect not only people’s well-being but also their understanding of the issue.
        • Public campaigns and health protection programmes should be promoted so that people know how to protect their health effectively. .> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "promote"
        • A person would easily avoid some potential health problems if he is equipped with sufficient basic knowledge about medicine and health care. 
      • Example: For example, when a child knows more about the adverse effects of smoking, he might be less likely to take up this bad habit in his adulthood. 

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

It is argued that enhancing public well-being (sức khỏe cộng đồng – public health) can best be achieved by building more sports amenities (tiện nghi thể thao – sports facilities). However, others believe this approach may be ineffectual (không hiệu quả – ineffective) without additional interventions. This essay will examine both perspectives before explaining why I side with the latter.

On the one hand, expanding access to exercise-friendly (thân thiện với luyện tập – suitable for physical activity) infrastructure can undoubtedly promote a healthier lifestyle. Public gyms, football fields, and fitness parks offer a convenient outlet (nơi thuận tiện – easy way) for physical activity, encouraging individuals to be more active. For instance, community-based initiatives (sáng kiến dựa vào cộng đồng – local programs) such as installing outdoor gym equipment have proven successful, as they attract both adults and children. In this way, sports facilities foster a positive attitude towards physical well-being (thái độ tích cực đối với sức khỏe thể chất) from an early age and contribute to reducing health issues related to inactivity.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

On the other hand, I firmly believe that improving public health requires more comprehensive measures (biện pháp toàn diện hơn – broader actions). Simply increasing facilities does not guarantee participation; lack of intrinsic motivation (thiếu động lực nội tại – personal drive) often prevents people from exercising. For example, many individuals sign up for gym memberships but abandon them after a few weeks. Instead, nationwide awareness campaigns (chiến dịch nâng cao nhận thức toàn quốc – public health education) about the dangers of sedentary lifestyles could yield greater long-term benefits. If people are educated about the risks of poor health habits, such as smoking or unhealthy diets, they are more likely to adopt preventive measures. A well-informed individual is better equipped to make health-conscious decisions (quyết định chú trọng sức khỏe – mindful of well-being).

In conclusion, while sports facilities have value, they are insufficient alone; long-term improvements in public health depend on education and proactive engagement.

🔹 New Vocabulary with Definitions (Bolded Words)

1. Public well-being

   • English: overall health and happiness of the population

   • Vietnamese: sức khỏe cộng đồng

   • Synonyms: public health, general welfare, collective wellness

   • Antonyms: individual concern, personal issue, private matter

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: enhancing public well-being can best be achieved...

2. Sports amenities

   • English: facilities or equipment for sports

   • Vietnamese: tiện nghi thể thao

   • Synonyms: sports infrastructure, athletic facilities, recreational resources

   • Antonyms: non-recreational spaces, indoor settings, sedentary facilities

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: expanding access to sports amenities...

3. Ineffectual

   • English: not effective

   • Vietnamese: không hiệu quả

   • Synonyms: ineffective, useless, futile

   • Antonyms: effective, powerful, productive

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: this approach may be ineffectual...

4. Exercise-friendly

   • English: designed to support physical activity

   • Vietnamese: thân thiện với việc tập thể dục

   • Synonyms: fitness-oriented, physically accommodating, gym-ready

   • Antonyms: inactive, sedentary, exercise-hostile

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: access to exercise-friendly infrastructure...

5. Convenient outlet

   • English: easy and accessible way to release energy

   • Vietnamese: nơi thuận tiện để rèn luyện

   • Synonyms: accessible platform, available space, fitness channel

   • Antonyms: restricted area, hard-to-access location, unavailable facility

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: a convenient outlet for physical activity...

6. Community-based initiatives

   • English: local programs that involve public participation

   • Vietnamese: sáng kiến dựa vào cộng đồng

   • Synonyms: local action, neighborhood programs, grassroots efforts

   • Antonyms: centralized policy, government-only intervention, top-down approach

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: such as community-based initiatives...

7. Positive attitude towards physical well-being

   • English: a healthy mindset about keeping fit

   • Vietnamese: thái độ tích cực đối với sức khỏe thể chất

   • Synonyms: health-mindedness, fitness positivity, wellness optimism

   • Antonyms: negligence of health, indifference to fitness, poor habits

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: foster a positive attitude towards physical well-being...

8. More comprehensive measures

   • English: broader and more effective actions

   • Vietnamese: biện pháp toàn diện hơn

   • Synonyms: holistic solutions, inclusive approaches, far-reaching reforms

   • Antonyms: narrow solutions, limited responses, incomplete methods

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: requires more comprehensive measures...

9. Lack of intrinsic motivation

   • English: absence of personal internal drive

   • Vietnamese: thiếu động lực nội tại

   • Synonyms: low self-drive, poor initiative, internal disinterest

   • Antonyms: self-motivation, personal drive, internal determination

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: lack of intrinsic motivation prevents people...

10. Nationwide awareness campaigns

    • English: country-wide health education programs

    • Vietnamese: chiến dịch nâng cao nhận thức toàn quốc

    • Synonyms: public health drives, national outreach, government awareness plans

    • Antonyms: local outreach, isolated programs, personal responsibility

    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: nationwide awareness campaigns could yield...

11. Health-conscious decisions

    • English: choices made with health in mind

    • Vietnamese: quyết định chú trọng sức khỏe

    • Synonyms: wellness-aware choices, preventive measures, health-driven actions

    • Antonyms: unhealthy habits, careless decisions, negligent behavior

    • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: make health-conscious decisions.

🔹 Difficult Grammar Structures (with Vietnamese Translation)

1. "While sports facilities have value, they are insufficient alone..."
   → Mệnh đề mở đầu bằng while để đưa ra sự nhượng bộ.
   → Mặc dù cơ sở vật chất thể thao có giá trị, chúng không đủ nếu chỉ có mình chúng...

2. "Improving public health requires more comprehensive measures."
   → Mệnh đề dùng gerund làm chủ ngữ (Improving).
   → Việc cải thiện sức khỏe cộng đồng đòi hỏi các biện pháp toàn diện hơn.

3. "A well-informed individual is better equipped to make health-conscious decisions."
   → Câu bị động dạng cụm tính từ + động từ nguyên mẫu.
   → Một người có đầy đủ thông tin sẽ có khả năng hơn để đưa ra những quyết định chú trọng sức khỏe.

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