Phân tích"Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?​"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích và sửa chi tiết đề thi IELTS SPEAKING 4/8/2020 [Audio+Transcript], IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 questions
• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi why
  • Triển khai 2 causes:
    • Cause 1: Di chuyển bằng bicycle mất thời gian hơn so với các phương tiện giao thông khác (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý: It would consume a considerable amount of time to travel by this means of transport)
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Since modern life is getting much busier than in the past, individuals nowadays want to spend as little time on transport as possible.
        • They prefer to use other types of vehicles such as motorbikes or cars which would take less time >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng prefer, would prefer, would rather, had better
      • Example: In a bustling city like Hanoi, the daily commute for a working professional poses a time challenge. Opting for a bicycle may entail navigating through congested streets, dealing with traffic jams, and enduring slower speeds, significantly consuming more time. Conversely, those choosing motorbikes or cars experience a faster and more efficient commute, affording them extra time for work, family, or leisure activities amid their hectic schedules.
    • Cause 2: Di chuyển bằng bicycle mất nhiều công sức hơn so với các phương tiện giao thông khác  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý: it is rather impractical to expect cycling in cities, or even the countryside HOẶC cycling is more physically demanding than riding a motorbike or driving a car)
      • Supporting idea: This tends to discourage people from choosing this method, especially on a hot and sunny day or when they have to travel a long distance >> IELTS TUTOR gợi ý PHÂN BIỆT JOURNEY, TRIP, TRAVEL & VOYAGE TIẾNG ANH
      • Example: In Mumbai, the combination of bustling streets, intense heat, and traffic congestion makes cycling impractical as a primary mode of transportation, discouraging individuals who prefer more comfortable alternatives like motorbikes or cars. 
• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi số 2  (nhớ là solution 1 phải giải quyết cho cause 1, solution 2 giải quyết cho cause 2)
  • Triển khai 2 Solutions ứng với 2 causes:
    • Solution 1: Tham khảo các mô hình bicycle sharing ở các nước phát triển như Singapore - 

      Bike sharing in Singapore has become a popular and sustainable transportation option, contributing to the city-state's commitment to eco-friendly mobility solutions.

      • Supporting idea: 
        • Singapore's well-developed bike-sharing infrastructure, featuring conveniently located docking stations throughout the city, facilitates easy access for residents and tourists alike. 
        • The availability of shared bikes addresses the last-mile connectivity challenge and complements existing public transportation systems.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: For instance, the introduction of bike-sharing services like oBike and GrabCycle has enabled users to conveniently pick up and drop off bicycles at various locations. This not only promotes a healthier lifestyle but also reduces traffic congestion and carbon emissions, aligning with Singapore's vision for a greener and more sustainable urban environment.
    • Solution 2: Làm cho việc di chuyển bằng bicycle ít tốn công sức hơn bằng cách xây các nhà gas hơn người đi xe đạp có thể đem hẳn xe đạp lên tàu điện ngầm rồi đạp từ tàu điện ngầm về chỗ làm (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý: more lanes should be built to serve only cyclists, which would make it much faster to travel with bicycles)
      • Supporting idea: Dedicated cycling lanes contribute to enhanced safety, efficiency, and overall appeal for cyclists, providing them with a designated space to navigate through urban areas.
      • Example: Cities like Copenhagen, Denmark, have successfully implemented extensive cycling infrastructure, including dedicated lanes separated from vehicular traffic. The presence of these exclusive cycling lanes has not only increased the safety of cyclists but has also encouraged more people to opt for bicycles as a primary mode of transportation. The result is a faster and more convenient travel experience for cyclists, promoting a sustainable and healthier commuting option.
• Tham khảo các Solutions khác mà IELTS TUTOR cung cấp:
  • Make it more costly to own a motorbike or a car >> IELTS TUTOR giới thiệu Từ vựng Topic Car IELTS 
  • Governments could conduct monthly green days that by law require citizens to cycle to work to get people involved in protecting their environment. In the long term, such an initiative would help to gradually form a habit of cycling among occupied individuals. >> IETLS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng từ "SUCH" tiếng anh
  • Propagation via various means of media along with optional courses about the advantages of cycling to the environment at schools seem imperative to heighten social awareness of this matter.

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