Phân tích"Doctors recommend that older people should get regular exercise. However, many older people do not take enough exercise. What could be the reasons for this? What can be done to encourage them to take exercise?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (COMPUTER 4/5/2022)

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Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Doctors recommend that older people should get regular exercise. However, many older people do not take enough exercise. What could be the reasons for this? What can be done to encourage them to take exercise?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (COMPUTER 4/5/2022)

I. Đề bài

Doctors recommend that older people should get regular exercise. However, many older people do not take enough exercise. What could be the reasons for this? What can be done to encourage them to take exercise?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

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  • Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
    • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
      • Main idea 1: Older people abstain from doing exercise due to fear of injury. 
        • Supporting idea: 
          • It is a well-known fact that during old age, the human body is weaker (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: older people naturally suffer from a range of minor or major and debilitating conditions such as poor cardiovascular health, arthritis, and dementia. Each presents unique challenges to a regular exercise regular routine)
          • If the body sustains any injury, recovery could take months or years. 
        • Example: To cite an example from my personal experience, my grandmother’s ankle got twisted during evening walk; therefore, she had to use wheelchair for 2 months and took another one month in order to walk properly, so from then on she is afraid of doing any exercise.
      • Main idea 2:  older people are often unable to afford the costs associated with learning a new sport or joining a gym >> IELTS TUTOR tổng hợp TỪ VỰNG TOPIC SPORTS IELTS
        • Supporting idea: most older people survive on a fixed income and must set aside money for medical bills >> Sports equipment is simply not a priority.
        • Example: 
    • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2  
      • Main idea 1: The family can play a crucial role in helping them to overcome this fear of injury.
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Instead of stimulating them to do strenuous activity, they should be taught about light forms of exercise, which requires slow movement of body Yoga. 
          • It is also necessary to encourage seniors to use protective gears like helmet and knee-cap while exercising. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "like" tiếng anh 
          • They can also perform household chores that do not require much effort. 
        • Example: For example, tending to the garden and sweeping the floors are activities that help with muscle movement and promote the health of joints.
      • Main idea 2:  the financial impediments can be effectively tackled by building more public parks and facilities. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng từ "facility" tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea:
          • An older person living in an urban area may lack easy access to a park or the transportation to travel to one far away. However, if there was one within walking distance they would be encouraged to exercise habitually. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng tính từ "urban"
        • Example: 

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