Phân tích"Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change affect all the people in the world. Although global decisions are made to reduce these problems, the solutions are not effective. Why are the solutions ineffective? How can these problems be solved?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi computer-based 23.11.2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change affect all the people in the world. Although global decisions are made to reduce these problems, the solutions are not effective. Why are the solutions ineffective? How can these problems be solved?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change affect all the people in the world. Although global decisions are made to reduce these problems, the solutions are not effective. Why are the solutions ineffective? How can these problems be solved?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
    • Main idea 1: Lack of awareness is probably the foremost reason why the vast majority of individuals appears to be unmindful of the current environmental issues.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Normally, people have tendency to downplay abstract problems, or those that likely to happen in the distant future. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "problem" tiếng anh
        • This is because they are not properly informed of the possible detrimental effects of taking the environment for granted. 
      • Example: 
        • To illustrate, residents in urban areas often deliberately dump their wastes into the nearby creeks and drainage canals causing them to become clogged. 
        • It is only when devastating floods strike, that they come to realize the consequences of their actions. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "realize" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: They are not willing to abandon the convenience and efficiency brought by some of high-end products even though the widespread use of them can have detrimental effects on environment.
      • Supporting idea: High-end products often offer convenience and efficiency that are hard to replicate with lower-impact alternatives, influencing consumers to prioritize their convenience over environmental concerns.
      • Example: For example, the excessive use of private cars in first-tier cities has led to an increase in the amount of carbon dioxide and other fumes emitted into the atmosphere. However, with more disposable money in people’s pockets, they still choose to buy brand new cars to drive to work or travel around, just immersing themselves in the convenience and privacy brought by owning a car and simply ignoring the negative effects on environment.
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
    • Main idea 1: when living in the natural world, each person has a variety of needs everyday to fulfil, and many of them directly affect the environment
      • Supporting idea: 
        • A reduction in the use of plastic bags by a shopper, or an action of turning off unnecessary lights seems insignificant but really makes great differences in protecting the environment (HOẶC: Practices such as applying recyclable cutlery instead of disposal ones in a family event and purchasing an environmental-friendly vehicle for travel significantly alleviate the resource shortage and air pollution). >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách paraphrase từ "difference"
      • Example: For instance, a simple act like a shopper reducing their use of plastic bags or someone turning off unnecessary lights might seem inconsequential but can indeed make a substantial impact on environmental conservation.
    • Main idea 2: Each person can play an important role in protecting their own neighborhood.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • By using their own vehicles only in rare cases, people would be able to protect the environment. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "vehicle" tiếng anh 
        • By stopping plastic waste from entering and contaminating waterways people are able to conserve drinkable water and its inhabitants.

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