Phân tích"For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn more money. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn more money. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

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• Theo hướng Partly (Vừa ủng hộ ý này, vừa ủng hộ ý kia) có thể tham khảo cách triển khai: 
  • Intro câu 2: Trong khi ý này cũng đúng, ý kia cũng có lý
    • Body 1: On the other hand, viết về ý số 1”the reason they work hard is to earn more money”
      • Main idea 1: Many people work hard to achieve financial security for themselves and their families. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
        • Supporting idea: 
          • Money is a means to provide basic needs such as food, shelter, healthcare, and education. 
          • In this sense, earning more money becomes essential for improving one's standard of living and ensuring a comfortable future.
        • Example: A study by researchers at Ohio State University found a strong correlation between financial insecurity and stress levels. Participants with higher levels of financial strain reported higher levels of anxiety and depression
      • Main idea 2: Some individuals are driven by materialistic desires, such as owning luxury items, traveling, or enjoying other indulgences. 
        • Supporting idea: For them, working hard and earning more money enable them to fulfill these desires and lead a more lavish lifestyle.
    • Body 2: On the one hand, viết về ý số 2” it is not universally true for everyone”
      • Main idea 1: Beyond monetary rewards, work can also provide individuals with a sense of recognition, accomplishment, and social status. 
        • Supporting idea: Climbing the career ladder, gaining respect from peers, or achieving personal goals can be powerful motivators irrespective of financial gains.
      • Main idea 2: Many people find purpose and fulfillment in their work beyond just financial compensation. 
        • Supporting idea: They are passionate about what they do, and the intrinsic rewards of pursuing their interests, honing their skills, and making a meaningful contribution to society are more significant drivers than monetary rewards.
        • Example: A passionate teacher finds fulfillment in educating students and making a meaningful contribution to society, valuing purpose over financial compensation.

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