Phân tích "Global climate has changed, should transport be reduced on the roads, e.g cars and lorries? Explain the advantages and the disadvantages in your relevant location and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020"Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Global climate has changed, should transport be reduced on the roads, e.g cars and lorries? Explain the advantages and the disadvantages in your relevant location and give your opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Global climate has changed, should transport be reduced on the roads, e.g cars and lorries? Explain the advantages and the disadvantages in your relevant location and give your opinion.

• Dạng outweigh thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng outweigh có 2 cách làm tuỳ theo target mình hướng đến:
  • Cách 1: Theo hướng Totally (disadvantages>advantages)
    • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: Reducing road transport would require significant changes in commuting patterns and transportation systems. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"transport"tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: This could result in longer commute times, especially in areas with limited public transit infrastructure or where alternative modes of transportation are less feasible.
      • Example: 
    • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao disadvantages>advantages
      • Main idea: The reduction of road transport, particularly for industries reliant on trucking and logistics, could have economic implications. 
      • Supporting idea: It may require the development of new transportation strategies and infrastructure to support alternative modes, which could involve initial investment costs and adjustments in business operations. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ"investment"tiếng anh 
      • Example: 
        • Many retailers rely on trucks to transport their goods from warehouses to stores. If road transport is reduced, retailers may have to raise prices or reduce their offerings.
        • The construction industry relies on trucks to transport materials to job sites. If road transport is reduced, construction projects may be delayed or canceled.
  • Cách 2: Theo hướng Partly (partly - CHỈ RIÊNG với dạng OUTWEIGH này thì nếu target 7.0 có thể viết còn các dạng khác không nên viết partly nhé) 
    • Intro câu 2, advantages = disadvantages (this trend could have positive and negative consequences in equal measures)
    • Body 1: On the one hand, viết về advantages 
      • Main idea 1: Road transport, especially vehicles powered by fossil fuels, is a major contributor to greenhouse gas emissions. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng EMISSIONS / EMISSION tiếng anh
        • Supporting idea: By reducing the number of cars and lorries on the roads, we can significantly decrease carbon dioxide and other pollutants released into the atmosphere, helping to mitigate climate change.
        • Example: 
          • A study by the International Council on Clean Transportation (ICCT) found that if all cars in the United States were replaced with electric vehicles, it would reduce carbon dioxide emissions by 22%.
          • A study by the University of Oxford found that if the average person in the United Kingdom walked or cycled for 20 minutes a day, it would reduce carbon dioxide emissions by 1.2 million tonnes per year.
      • Main idea 2: Encouraging alternative modes of transportation, such as public transit, cycling, and walking, can reduce congestion on roads and promote healthier, more sustainable lifestyles. 
        • Supporting idea: These options have the potential to improve physical fitness, reduce traffic congestion, and enhance urban livability.
        • Example: A study by the University of California, Berkeley found that public transit can reduce traffic congestion by up to 30%.
    • Body 2: On the other hand, viết về disadvantages 
      • Main idea 1: Reducing road transport would require significant changes in commuting patterns and transportation systems. 
        • Supporting idea: This could result in longer commute times, especially in areas with limited public transit infrastructure or where alternative modes of transportation are less feasible.
        • Example: 
      • Main idea 2: The reduction of road transport, particularly for industries reliant on trucking and logistics, could have economic implications. 
        • Supporting idea: It may require the development of new transportation strategies and infrastructure to support alternative modes, which could involve initial investment costs and adjustments in business operations. >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng động từ "involve" tiếng anh
        • Example: 
          • Many retailers rely on trucks to transport their goods from warehouses to stores. If road transport is reduced, retailers may have to raise prices or reduce their offerings.
          • The construction industry relies on trucks to transport materials to job sites. If road transport is reduced, construction projects may be delayed or canceled.

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