Phân tích đề"It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

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Bên cạnh SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing, IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích IELTS WRITING TASK 2 "It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness"

I. Đề bài

Question: It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

(IELTS Academic – 08/05/2021)

II. Từ vựng

III. Phân tích bài essay "prevention vs treatment"

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Bài này thuộc dạng đề opinion essay mà IELTS TUTOR đã có hướng dẫn, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY có thể triển khai như sau:
    • Nêu 2 lí do ở 2 thân bài vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
      • Body 1: Lí do thứ 1 vì sao lại TOTALLY AGREE với quan điểm đề cho là "It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill" >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách paraphrase "prevent" tiếng anh 
        • Có thể triển khai main idea theo hướng: như vậy mới giải quyết triệt để vấn đề 
          • Main idea: If people remain vigilant to avoid severe ailments, they stand a lower chance of contracting them.
          • Supporting idea: Human health can be reinforced and maintained effectively in the long term via varied approaches like dieting, exercising, and even spiritual therapy. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách paraphrase "effective" tiếng anh
          • Example: 
            • If all people become fully convinced of the importance of choosing healthy diets involving less meat and more vegetables instead of consuming junk food, they will start to adopt such a healthy lifestyle and, therefore, will be able to avoid a host of health problems.
            • Working out on a daily basis will result in fewer patients visiting hospitals, thus reducing the amount of money spent on hospitalization and other medical fees
      • Body 2: Lí do thứ 1 vì sao lại TOTALLY AGREE với quan điểm đề cho là "It is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on treatment of people who are already ill" 
        • Main idea: This strategy appears more time- and cost-effective.
        • Supporting idea: 
        • Example: Once a patient is diagnosed with cancer, he or she will either pour their fortunes into immediate treatment, or choose to wait for their inevitable doom >> All this money can be well-saved, and time can be lengthened, thanks to proper preventative schemes.
      • Ngoài ra có thể triển khai main idea theo hướng khác: không tạo tâm lí ỷ lại cứ mắc bệnh rồi lại được chữa, đặc biệt nguy hiểm với các bệnh như aids

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