Phân tích"In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (25/09/2021)

In cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 
  • Main idea 1: Cause 1: The high number of vehicle is caused by the population and the development of economy. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ "cause" tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: 
      • As the population increases, there is a greater demand for transportation, leading to a surge in vehicle ownership. 
      • Economic development often results in improved living standards and increased disposable income, making it more affordable for individuals to purchase and maintain vehicles.
    • Example: For example, in rapidly developing countries like China and India, the combination of booming populations and economic growth has led to a significant increase in the number of cars on the road. As more people can afford to buy vehicles, this trend is likely to persist, contributing to the ongoing rise in the total number of vehicles globally.

  • Main idea 2: Cause 2: The inadequate infrastructure cannot handle the issue of traffic
    • Supporting idea:
      • The public transport such as bus, subway or train is not available, and its quality is very bad, especially in the developing countries
      • The highway and road network is incapable of meeting the requirement of increasing number of vehicle
    • Example: Dhaka, Bangladesh, exemplifies how inadequate infrastructure, characterized by narrow roads, limited highways, and an inefficient public transport system, can result in severe traffic congestion, causing over eight million lost working hours daily in 2023.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)

• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 
  • Main idea 1: Solution 1: The government should encourage people to use public transport or vehicles with small size such as bicycles or make tax on private vehicles. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng động từ"encourage"tiếng anh
    • Supporting idea: Public transport and bicycles produce fewer emissions compared to private vehicles, contributing to reduced air pollution and mitigating the impact of climate change.
    • Example:  in some Asia countries such as Viet Nam, the local authorities passed law restricting to the number of vehicles for each family
  • Main idea 2: Solution 2: The government should make an investment in the traffic facilities
    • Supporting idea:
      • The public transport need improving to become more modern and convenient.
      • It is useful to build overpasses and more lanes in the streets.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • Example: Singapore's efficient public transport system and government investments in traffic facilities, including road infrastructure and parking management, have significantly reduced traffic congestion, with an average daily commute time of around 45 minutes despite its high population density.

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