Phân tích "In many cities an increaing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is a lack of sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 24/3/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In many cities an increaing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is a lack of sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 24/3/2023)

In many cities an increaing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is a lack of sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?

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• Dạng 2 question có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 What problems does this cause? 
    • Main idea 1: Some young people live very busy lives (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: The major reason for the limited friendly relationships between neighbors is the absence of interaction)
      • Supporting idea:
        • Due to the radical changes in lifestyle over the years, people no longer need to interact with their neighbors like before, which means cultivating friendly relationships requires more effort
        • The rate of interaction in the past allowed the community to develop with minimal effort, and neighbors were friendly because they constantly interacted.
        • They want to take the garbage out or pick up the newspaper without turning it into a half hour ordeal. >> IELTS TUTOR Giải thích phrasal verb: pick up
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: Born in the digital age, young people are thought to be disconnected from their local area because they are addicted to social networking sites.
      • Supporting idea: With much of our lives having moved online, there is a perception that people have become detached from their local community.
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 What can be done about this?
    • Main idea 1: People could plan a ceremony to celebrate these special events together.
      • Supporting idea:
      • Example: For instance, they could gather in one’s home or if the building has a garden they could meet each other there. >> IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Cách dùng cụm "for instance" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 2: families who have children could let them play with each other and strike a friendship instead of allowing children to sit in front of their computers all day long.
      • Supporting idea: In this way, the child’s parents meet and get to know others’ parents as well.
      • Example: 

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