Phân tích"In many countries, government spent a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?"(kèm bài sửa)

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In many countries, government spent a large amount of money on improving internet access. Why is it happening and do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money?

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  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi 1 Why is it happening 
    • Main idea 1: The Internet enables students to enhance their general understanding of nearly all subjects (broaden their horizons)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng động từ "enable" tiếng anh
      • Supporting idea: School age children can access educational videos on YouTube, read online articles and use interactive learning platforms. 
      • Example: 
    • Main idea: 2 The Internet gives workers great access to various sources of knowledge so that they can know how to solve difficulties in their work (HOẶC: Workers can gain access to an enormous volume of information which can assist them in solving work-related problems and increase their work productivity.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Phân biệt "access" dùng như danh từ & động từ
      • Supporting idea: 
      • Example: By using search engines such as Google and Yahoo, they can also find any data on almost any subject they are looking for. 
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 do you think it is the most appropriate use of government money? - upgrading internet access is not the best way to allocate government money   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng tính từ "appropriate" tiếng anh
    • Main idea 1:  The broadband connection in most countries today is fast enough to satisfy the basic demands of the public. 
      • Supporting idea: An improvement in the quality of the Internet supply can be deemed not obligatory and urgent.
      • Example: For example, in Vietnam, hardly do individuals have to wait a long time for a web page to load 
    • Main idea 2: There are several other fields which are being placed under strain and require the capital disbursement to function  (IELTS TUTOR gợi ý cách diễn đạt khác: there are some other areas that authorities could invest in as a pre-requisite complement before supplying a widespread network)
      • Supporting idea: Constructing schools and deploying qualified teachers to areas that are used to the absence of the Internet and are unaware of the benefits it might offer could be more promising   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "across" tiếng anh 
      • Example: 

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