Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In many countries, primary and secondary schools close for two months or more in the summer holidays. what is the value of long school holidays? what are the arguments in favor of shorter school holidays?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Kèm bài mẫu + giải thích vocab

In many countries, primary and secondary schools close for two months or more in the summer holidays. what is the value of long school holidays? what are the arguments in favor of shorter school holidays?

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

In many countries, schools shut down for two or more months during the summer. While some argue that extended holidays offer various benefits, others believe that shorter breaks are more advantageous for students’ academic development.

One clear benefit of long school holidays is the opportunity for recreational activities (recreational activities – các hoạt động giải trí – leisure pursuits, fun-based engagements, pastime activities). Students can engage in sports, travel, or simply relax, which can help them recharge their batteries (recharge their batteries – nạp lại năng lượng – rest and recover, rejuvenate, regain energy) after a rigorous academic year. This period also allows children to develop soft skills (develop soft skills – phát triển kỹ năng mềm – enhance interpersonal skills, cultivate communication abilities, improve adaptability) such as communication, teamwork, and independence, especially through summer camps and volunteer work. Additionally, families can spend more quality time (quality time – thời gian chất lượng – meaningful time, valuable moments, precious bonding time) together, which strengthens family bonds and emotional well-being. These breaks thus serve as a crucial mental detox (mental detox – giải độc tinh thần – psychological relief, emotional cleanse, stress relief) for both students and teachers.>> tham khảo CẦN VIẾT & THU ÂM BAO NHIÊU BÀI ĐỂ ĐẠT 8.0 SPEAKING & 7.0 WRITING?

On the other hand, advocates of shorter holidays argue that long breaks can lead to a learning loss (learning loss – sự mất kiến thức – academic setback, knowledge gap, skill deterioration), especially for younger children who may struggle to recall previously learned material. Shorter breaks, spread throughout the year, ensure continuity in learning (continuity in learning – sự liên tục trong học tập – academic consistency, educational flow, regular instruction) and reduce the pressure of re-adjustment periods (re-adjustment periods – giai đoạn tái thích nghi – reintegration phase, transition time, adaptation stage) once school resumes. Moreover, working parents (working parents – cha mẹ đi làm – employed guardians, full-time parents, career-oriented caregivers) often find it difficult to arrange childcare for long breaks, making shorter holidays a more practical solution (practical solution – giải pháp thiết thực – feasible approach, realistic option, manageable plan) from both educational and logistical perspectives.

In conclusion, while long school holidays offer numerous emotional and developmental advantages, shorter breaks may better support academic consistency and family logistics.

🔹 New Vocabulary with Definitions

1. Recreational activities – các hoạt động giải trí
   ⇒ Leisure pursuits, fun-based engagements, pastime activities
   ❌ Workload, obligations, academic tasks
   📌 IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “One clear benefit of long school holidays is the opportunity for recreational activities…”

2. Recharge their batteries – nạp lại năng lượng
   ⇒ Rest and recover, rejuvenate, regain energy
   ❌ Exhaust, overwork, drain
   📌 IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “…which can help them recharge their batteries after a rigorous academic year.”

3. Develop soft skills – phát triển kỹ năng mềm
   ⇒ Enhance interpersonal skills, cultivate communication abilities, improve adaptability
   ❌ Ignore communication, neglect teamwork, devalue interpersonal growth
   📌 IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “This period also allows children to develop soft skills…”

4. Quality time – thời gian chất lượng
   ⇒ Meaningful time, valuable moments, precious bonding time
   ❌ Time-wasting, superficial interaction, neglect
   📌 IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Families can spend more quality time together…”

5. Mental detox – giải độc tinh thần
   ⇒ Psychological relief, emotional cleanse, stress relief
   ❌ Mental overload, burnout, anxiety build-up
   📌 IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “These breaks thus serve as a crucial mental detox…”

6. Learning loss – sự mất kiến thức
   ⇒ Academic setback, knowledge gap, skill deterioration
   ❌ Learning gain, academic progress, knowledge acquisition
   📌 IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “…long breaks can lead to a learning loss…”

7. Continuity in learning – sự liên tục trong học tập
   ⇒ Academic consistency, educational flow, regular instruction
   ❌ Interrupted education, learning gaps, discontinuous study
   📌IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Shorter breaks, spread throughout the year, ensure continuity in learning…”

8. Re-adjustment periods – giai đoạn tái thích nghi
   ⇒ Reintegration phase, transition time, adaptation stage
   ❌ Steady routine, unchanged pattern, continuous momentum
   📌 IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “…and reduce the pressure of re-adjustment periods…”

9. Working parents – cha mẹ đi làm
   ⇒ Employed guardians, full-time parents, career-oriented caregivers
   ❌ Stay-at-home parents, unemployed caregivers, retired guardians
   📌 IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ “…working parents often find it difficult…”

10. Practical solution – giải pháp thiết thực
    ⇒ Feasible approach, realistic option, manageable plan
    ❌ Impractical idea, unrealistic option, ineffective method
    📌 IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ “…making shorter holidays a more practical solution…”

🔹 Advanced Grammar Structures (with Vietnamese translation)

1. Reduced relative clause
   📌 IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “Students can engage in sports, travel, or simply relax, which can help them recharge their batteries...”
   ➤ Mệnh đề quan hệ rút gọn giúp câu gọn hơn và mượt hơn.

2. Complex noun phrases
   📌 IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “The pressure of re-adjustment periods once school resumes.”
   ➤ Cụm danh từ phức để tăng độ học thuật cho bài viết.

3. While clause to show contrast
   📌 IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: “While long school holidays offer numerous emotional and developmental advantages, shorter breaks may better support academic consistency…”
   ➤ Cấu trúc “While + S + V” dùng để đối chiếu hai mặt của vấn đề.

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