Phân tích "In some countries, people are having children at later age in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantage outweigh disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 16/9/2022)

· Task 2,Đề thi IELTS thật

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In some countries, people are having children at later age in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantage outweigh disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 16/9/2022)

I. Đề bài

In some countries, people are having children at later age in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantage outweigh disadvantages?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

III. Phân tích

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

  • Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi "What are the reasons"
    • Main idea 1: The fact that pregnancy has been more common in older women stems from late marriage 
      • Supporting idea: Late marriage would help singles have more time to seek a stable job and broaden behavioral experience before deciding to live with someone forever   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase từ "HELP" trong tiếng anh
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: It is widely believed that children are raised better by older parents
      • Example: 
      • Supporting idea: TYING THE KNOT EARLY, in some cases, would cause constant quarrels about rights of child-rearing between young couples due to their immature thoughts on marital values ><  DELAYED MARRIAGE may secure better conditions for children’s future (HOẶC: older fathers and mothers are generally wealthier, more experienced, and more willing to take the responsibility of bringing up a child)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ "lead to" tiếng anh
  • Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 (disadvantages > advantages)
    • Main idea 1: (Nên viết về family life): having children later will cause a significant age gap between the two generations.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "find out / discover/learn" IELTS
      • Supporting idea: This makes it harder for parents to understand and communicate with their offspring
      • Example: 
    • Main idea 2: (Nên viết về society) Having children when reaching over 35 can affect pregnancy due to aging health >> This might adversely affect the quality of the future workforce if too many people decide to follow this trend
      • Supporting idea:  Babies are not healthy enough or even die premature death because mothers' health will decline (HOẶC: when an aged couple decides to give birth, there are serious health risks for the woman in the prenatal and postnatal period)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Family (child education, child birth...) IELTS
      • Example: 

Các khóa học IELTS online 1 kèm 1 - 100% cam kết đạt target 6.0 - 7.0 - 8.0

>> IELTS Intensive Writing - Sửa bài chi tiết

>> IELTS Intensive Listening

>> IELTS Intensive Reading

>> IELTS Cấp tốc

>> Thành tích học sinh IELTS TUTOR với hàng ngàn feedback được cập nhật hàng ngày

Các khóa học IELTS online 1 kèm 1 - 100% cam kết đạt target 6.0 - 7.0 - 8.0
Các khóa học IELTS online 1 kèm 1 - 100% cam kết đạt target 6.0 - 7.0 - 8.0
All Posts
×

Almost done…

We just sent you an email. Please click the link in the email to confirm your subscription!

OK