Phân tích "In some countries, people are having children at later age in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantage outweigh disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 16/9/2022)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "In some countries, people are having children at later age in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantage outweigh disadvantages?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 16/9/2022)

In some countries, people are having children at later age in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantage outweigh disadvantages?

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Body 1: Trả lời câu hỏi "What are the reasons"
  • Main idea 1: The fact that pregnancy has been more common in older women stems from late marriage 
    • Supporting idea: Late marriage would help singles have more time to seek a stable job and broaden behavioral experience before deciding to live with someone forever   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase từ "HELP" trong tiếng anh
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  • Main idea 2: It is widely believed that children are raised better by older parents
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    • Supporting idea: TYING THE KNOT EARLY, in some cases, would cause constant quarrels about rights of child-rearing between young couples due to their immature thoughts on marital values ><  DELAYED MARRIAGE may secure better conditions for children’s future (HOẶC: older fathers and mothers are generally wealthier, more experienced, and more willing to take the responsibility of bringing up a child)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Paraphrase từ "lead to" tiếng anh
• Body 2: Trả lời câu hỏi 2 (disadvantages > advantages)
  • Main idea 1: (Nên viết về family life): having children later will cause a significant age gap between the two generations.   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách paraphrase "find out / discover/learn" IELTS
    • Supporting idea: This makes it harder for parents to understand and communicate with their offspring
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  • Main idea 2: (Nên viết về society) Having children when reaching over 35 can affect pregnancy due to aging health >> This might adversely affect the quality of the future workforce if too many people decide to follow this trend
    • Supporting idea:  Babies are not healthy enough or even die premature death because mothers' health will decline (HOẶC: when an aged couple decides to give birth, there are serious health risks for the woman in the prenatal and postnatal period)   >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Từ vựng topic Family (child education, child birth...) IELTS
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