Phân tích"In the past shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is positive trend?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"In the past shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is positive trend?"IELTS WRITING TASK 2

In the past shopping was a routine domestic task. Many people nowadays regard it as a hobby. To what extent do you think this is positive trend?

• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng positive):
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea: Considering shopping a hobby could potentially lead to overspending, especially if individuals prioritize immediate gratification over long-term financial stability. 
    • Supporting idea: This can result in debt and financial stress.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
    • Example: In the United States, the average household spends about $1,000 per month on non-essential items. This includes clothing, shoes, accessories, electronics, home goods, and other miscellaneous items.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao NEGATIVE 
    • Main idea: Spending excessive time on shopping might lead to neglecting other important activities, such as work, family time, hobbies that offer personal growth, and community involvement.
    • Supporting idea: 
      • Shopping can be time-consuming, especially when it becomes a frequent and extended activity. 
      • The time spent in stores, online shops, or malls can add up, taking away time from other essential aspects of life.
    • Example: 
      • A study published in the journal "Psychology of Addictive Behaviors" found that people who are addicted to shopping are more likely to neglect their work, relationships, and health.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
      • Another study, published in the journal "Journal of Consumer Research," found that people who spend more time shopping are less satisfied with their lives overall.

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