Phân tích "It is increasingly expensive to keep museums open to public. What do you think is the best way to fund them? (the government, businesses or individuals?)" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) Some students work while studying. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend and give your opinion? NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "It is increasingly expensive to keep museums open to public. What do you think is the best way to fund them? (the government, businesses or individuals?)" IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

It is increasingly expensive to keep museums open to public. What do you think is the best way to fund them? (the government, businesses or individuals?)

Cách 1 là chọn 1 đối tượng (ví dụ governments) rồi mỗi thân bài nêu 1 lí do vì sao đối tượng này lại phù hợp cho việc này, nếu bố cục như cách 1 này thì có thể phân bố bài như sau

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé.
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng THE GOVERNMENT (the government of the nation is more responsible for the investment when it comes to public places) có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao THE GOVERNMENT 
    • Main idea: The authorities not only earn by charging entry fees for these museums, but also is answerable to the indigenous taxes paid by its citizens.
      • Supporting idea: Every year a nation earns million from tourists visiting museums, and this money should be used for maintenance of these places.
      • Example: In 2021, The Louvre Museum in Paris received €100 million in funding from the French government, which is utilized for maintaining the museum's collection, buildings, and grounds.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao THE GOVERNMENT 
    • Main idea: Unlike business and individuals, the successive government is liable for its constructive actions toward citizens who elects them >> IELTS TUTOR lưu ý Cách dùng danh từ "individual" 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • If they have to pay for everything, then government existence is irrelevant.

IELTS TUTOR lưu ý:

• • Body 1: ON THE ONE HAND, Viết về đối tượng GOVERNMENTS
    • Main idea 1: Governments are essential cultural and educational institutions that preserve and showcase a nation's history, art, and heritage. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Museums serve as repositories of knowledge, offering insights into the past, present, and future. 
        • They promote cultural understanding, appreciation, and identity, contributing to a sense of national and community pride.
    • Main idea 2: By providing financial support and resources to museums, the government ensures their sustainability and accessibility to the public. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Government funding helps cover operational costs, maintenance, and the development of exhibitions and educational programs. 
        • This support allows museums to continue their valuable work of collecting, preserving, and presenting artifacts and artworks for the benefit of society.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Example: In 2021, The Louvre Museum in Paris received €100 million in funding from the French government, which is utilized for maintaining the museum's collection, buildings, and grounds.
  • Body 2: ON THE OTHER HAND, Viết về đối tượng COMPANIES
    • Main idea 1: Companies, especially large corporations, often have significant financial resources that they can allocate towards supporting cultural institutions like museums.
      • Supporting idea:  Their financial backing can provide much-needed funding for museum operations, exhibitions, and educational programs.
      • Example: Coca-Cola, a beverage company, has engaged in multiple partnerships with The Met, sponsoring their "Fashioning Masculinities" exhibition in 2016 and collaborating on a series of educational programs focusing on fashion.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ SỬA BÀI IELTS WRITING TASK 2 ĐỀ THI THẬT NGÀY 22/8/2020 của HS IELTS TUTOR đạt 6.5 Writing
    • Main idea 2: Companies can establish long-term partnerships with museums, allowing for sustained support and collaborative initiatives. 
      • Supporting idea: These partnerships can lead to co-created exhibitions, educational programs, or community outreach projects, enhancing the impact of the funding.
      • Example: For example, a technology company might sponsor a museum focused on digital art or innovation, showcasing shared interests and creating a meaningful partnership.

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