Phân tích "Living in big cities is bad for health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 8/1/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Living in big cities is bad for health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi IELTS 8/1/2023)

Living in big cities is bad for health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

• Dạng opinion essay thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng TOTALLY AGREE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: These days, increased levels of pollution have been a great cause for concern among residents of big cities. 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Due to high volumes of traffic, large quantities of pollutants are being released into the atmosphere, causing the degradation of air quality, which is said to be a significant contributor to various types of respiratory disease, such as lung cancer. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Sửa bài IELTS SPEAKING PART 1-2-3 topic Work/Study(Sửa & Làm lại 4 lần - HS đạt 7.5)
        • Pollutants including exhaust emissions from motor vehicles and coal ash from industrial parks and are the main culprits of a number of health problems including respiratory infections, heart disease and lung cancer. 
      • Example: 
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao TOTALLY AGREE
    • Main idea: Some mental health problems would likely be the result of city life. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  Cách dùng "as a result (of)" tiếng anh 
      • Supporting idea: 
        • The constant stream of noise from construction sites and transportation systems would result in noise pollution, and this might cause hypertension, tinnitus and sleep disturbances. 
        • Heavy traffic congestion in some metropolises like Beijing often makes commuters feel frustrated, and busy lifestyles might deprive people their time to relax, negatively affecting their health. >> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn  CÁCH DÙNG TỪ "THEREBY" TIẾNG ANH
      • Example: 

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