Phân tích "Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it give ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to Environmental problem, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 26/3/2023 & 21/11/2023)

Bên cạnh Phân tích bài essay về "The number of visitors in the UK" IELTS WRITING TASK 1 (table), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it give ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to Environmental problem, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion." IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Đề thi 26/3/2023)

Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it give ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, others think this leads to Environmental problem, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

• Lưu ý ở đây đề đã cho sẵn cách triển khai nên các main idea nếu không liên quan đến cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom & the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems sẽ có khả năng sai task response nhé 
• Dạng discuss both views thì đã rất quen thuộc với các bạn học sinh lớp IELTS ONLINE WRITING 1 KÈM 1 của IELTS TUTOR rồi nhé
• Dạng discuss both views có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Viết về quan điểm others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems
    • Main idea 1: The rise in the number of flights will increase the amount of jet fuel burnt in the air.
      • Supporting idea: Carbon emission and pollution will increase leading to global warming.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn Phân biệt INCREASE động từ & INCREASE danh từ 
      • Example: In the midst of the aviation boom in Southeast Asia, propelled by flourishing economies, the region faces a potential tripling of aviation emissions by 2040, according to a recent study by the International Energy Agency, emphasizing the urgent need for measures to curb emissions and promote sustainable aviation practices.
    • Main idea 2: cheap air tickets at times are extremely annoying in terms of certain conditions that go along with them.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • One problem is that the date and time cannot be changed once purchased. 
        • As a result, many people find it inconvenient if they are to reschedule due to emergency.
      • Example: Sarah, a budget-savvy backpacker, faced a financial and emotional setback when her fixed-date ticket to Thailand, secured at a dirt-cheap price, became non-refundable, forcing her to forfeit the flight and navigate the unexpected challenges of reaching her destination amid her grandmother's illness.
  • Body 2: Viết về quan điểm Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom & nêu rõ mình ủng hộ quan điểm này 
    • Main idea 1: Most of the people now have equal opportunity to explore the world all because of cheap flights>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ Hướng dẫn đề thi IELTS 21/11/2020 bài WRITING TASK 1 (map) về school library (kèm bài sửa cho HS đi thi)
      • Supporting idea: Traveling by air used to be a luxurious method of travel; however, low cost airlines such as Air Asia and Vietjet Air have given the opportunity for ordinary people to travel abroad with inexpensive flight to gain more knowledge
      • Example: Mr. Nguyen, a factory worker in Ho Chi Minh City, envisions exploring the ancient temples of Angkor Wat in Cambodia, made possible by a $50 return flight on Vietjet Air, offering him an affordable opportunity to firsthand experience a different culture and broaden his understanding of history and religion beyond his home city.
    • Main idea 2: Cheap air flight enables intercultural exchanges between countries. The advent of cheap air fare makes it possible for people the world over to travel regularly, regardless of the purpose of the trip.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • People have the opportunities to learn from different cultures and have a better understanding of countries they used to be unfamiliar with. 
        • This, in turn, enhances cultural communications between countries.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫnParaphrase từ "increase/rocket"

IELTS TUTOR gợi ý bài tham khảo:

It is argued that cheap air travel should be encouraged since it enables ordinary people to travel further, while others contend that it should be restricted due to its detrimental (causing harm; gây hại) impact on the environment. In my opinion, despite its environmental consequences, affordable flights should be supported as they bring immense social and cultural benefits.

On the one hand, critics claim that the rise of budget airlines has intensified environmental concerns. An escalation (a rapid increase; sự leo thang) in air travel leads to a substantial amount of jet fuel being burned, thereby releasing excessive carbon emissions (khí thải carbon; khí thải CO2) that accelerate global warming (sự nóng lên toàn cầu). For example, the International Energy Agency recently highlighted that aviation emissions in Southeast Asia could triple by 2040 without urgent action. Furthermore, low-cost tickets often come with stringent (strict; nghiêm ngặt) conditions. A common issue is that tickets are non-refundable and fixed-date, which may cause considerable inconvenience (sự bất tiện lớn) when passengers need to reschedule due to emergencies. A case in point is Sarah, a budget-savvy traveler, who lost her money and faced emotional stress when she was unable to change her cheap flight to Thailand during her grandmother’s illness.

On the other hand, proponents argue that affordable air travel has democratized (made accessible to everyone; dân chủ hóa) opportunities for exploration. Previously, air travel was considered a luxury pursuit (thú vui xa xỉ), but low-cost carriers like Air Asia and Vietjet Air now make international trips feasible for the working class. For instance, Mr. Nguyen, a factory worker in Ho Chi Minh City, was able to visit Angkor Wat in Cambodia with a $50 return ticket, thereby gaining exposure to another culture and deepening his knowledge of history and religion. Moreover, inexpensive flights promote intercultural exchanges (sự trao đổi văn hoá) by allowing individuals from diverse backgrounds to connect regularly, which strengthens mutual understanding (sự thấu hiểu lẫn nhau) among nations. This not only enhances cultural appreciation but also fosters more peaceful international relations.

In conclusion, while cheap flights undeniably contribute to environmental damage, their role in expanding opportunities for ordinary people and boosting cultural connections makes them a positive development overall.

📌 New Vocabulary with Vietnamese meaning

1. detrimental – causing harm (gây hại)

   • Synonyms: harmful, damaging, adverse

   • Antonyms: beneficial, favorable, advantageous

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "due to its detrimental impact on the environment."

2. escalation – a rapid increase (sự leo thang)

   • Synonyms: surge, growth, intensification

   • Antonyms: decline, reduction, decrease

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "An escalation in air travel leads to..."

3. carbon emissions – CO2 released into the air (khí thải carbon)

   • Synonyms: greenhouse gases, CO2 release, pollutants

   • Antonyms: clean air, zero emissions, purification

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "thereby releasing excessive carbon emissions"

4. stringent – very strict (nghiêm ngặt)

   • Synonyms: strict, rigorous, harsh

   • Antonyms: lenient, flexible, relaxed

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "tickets often come with stringent conditions"

5. considerable inconvenience – large difficulty (sự bất tiện lớn)

   • Synonyms: major trouble, serious problem, hardship

   • Antonyms: convenience, ease, comfort

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "may cause considerable inconvenience"

6. democratized – made accessible to everyone (dân chủ hóa)

   • Synonyms: popularized, universalized, equalized

   • Antonyms: restricted, privatized, monopolized

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụy: "affordable air travel has democratized opportunities"

7. luxury pursuit – an expensive leisure activity (thú vui xa xỉ)

   • Synonyms: indulgence, extravagance, privilege

   • Antonyms: necessity, basic need, essential

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "air travel was considered a luxury pursuit"

8. intercultural exchanges – cultural interactions (sự trao đổi văn hoá)

   • Synonyms: cross-cultural interactions, cultural sharing, cultural interchange

   • Antonyms: cultural isolation, segregation, separation

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "inexpensive flights promote intercultural exchanges"

9. mutual understanding – shared comprehension (sự thấu hiểu lẫn nhau)

   • Synonyms: reciprocity, rapport, empathy

   • Antonyms: misunderstanding, conflict, alienation

   • IELTS TUTOR xét ví dụ: "which strengthens mutual understanding"

📌 Difficult Grammar Structures

1. Despite its environmental consequences, affordable flights should be supported as they bring immense social and cultural benefits.

   • Structure: Despite + noun phrase, clause (Mặc dù… nhưng…)

   • Vietnamese: Mặc dù có những hậu quả về môi trường, các chuyến bay giá rẻ vẫn nên được ủng hộ vì chúng mang lại lợi ích xã hội và văn hoá to lớn.

2. An escalation in air travel leads to a substantial amount of jet fuel being burned, thereby releasing excessive carbon emissions.

   • Structure: thereby + V-ing (như vậy, dẫn đến…)

   • Vietnamese: Sự gia tăng của việc đi lại bằng đường hàng không dẫn đến một lượng lớn nhiên liệu bị đốt cháy, từ đó thải ra khí carbon quá mức.

3. which strengthens mutual understanding among nations.

   • Structure: Relative clause (which + verb) (mệnh đề quan hệ)

   • Vietnamese: Điều này củng cố sự thấu hiểu lẫn nhau giữa các quốc gia.

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