Phân tích "Modern technology allows machines to perform the hard work instead of humans. Does this have a positive or a negative effect on people? Give your own opinion and examples." IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI TASK 1 VIẾT THƯ NGÀY 05/7/2020"you are going to take a holiday and your friend agrees to stay at your house. Write a letter to him for"IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa HS đạt 6.0 đi thi thật), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích "Modern technology allows machines to perform the hard work instead of humans. Does this have a positive or a negative effect on people? Give your own opinion and examples." IELTS WRITING TASK 2.

Modern technology allows machines to perform the hard work instead of humans. Does this have a positive or a negative effect on people? Give your own opinion and examples.

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• Dạng opinion essay, nếu theo hướng POSITIVE có thể bố cục bài như sau:
  • Body 1: Nêu lí do thứ 1 vì sao POSITIVE 
    • Main idea: Automation can significantly enhance productivity, as machines can perform tasks faster and with greater precision, leading to higher output and economic growth.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Machines are programmed to perform tasks with consistent precision, eliminating human errors and variations. This reliability in execution ensures a higher level of quality and accuracy in the output.
        • Automation is particularly advantageous for tasks that involve repetitive actions. Machines can handle repetitive tasks without getting bored or losing focus, maintaining productivity over extended periods.
      • Example: 
        • A study by the McKinsey Global Institute found that automation could potentially boost global productivity by up to 1.4% per year.
        • A study by the Boston Consulting Group found that automation could save businesses up to $1 trillion per year by 2025.
  • Body 2: Nêu lí do thứ 2 vì sao POSITIVE 
    • Main idea: By delegating dangerous or physically demanding tasks to machines, the risk of workplace injuries and accidents for humans is reduced.
      • Supporting idea: 
        • Machines can be designed and programmed to follow strict safety protocols, minimizing the likelihood of accidents. They can be equipped with safety sensors and emergency shutdown mechanisms to prevent potential hazards.
        • Machines can handle heavy loads and repetitive tasks without experiencing fatigue or physical strain, which reduces the risk of musculoskeletal injuries for human workers who would otherwise have to perform such tasks.
      • Example: 
        • For example, robots are now being used to weld, paint, and lift heavy objects. This has led to a significant reduction in the number of workplace injuries in the manufacturing industry.
        • Robots are now being used to perform tasks that are dangerous for humans, such as inspecting and repairing machinery in underground mines. This has led to a significant reduction in the number of fatalities in the mining industry.

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