Phân tích"More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

· Task 2,Writing

Bên cạnh PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI TASK 1 VIẾT THƯ NGÀY 05/7/2020"you are going to take a holiday and your friend agrees to stay at your house. Write a letter to him for"IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa HS đạt 6.0 đi thi thật), IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn Phân tích"More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?" IELTS WRITING TASK 2

I. Đề bài

More and more people no longer read newspapers or watch TV programs to get news. They get news about the world through the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

II. Kiến thức liên quan

IELTS TUTOR hướng dẫn:

III. Phân tích

  • Dạng this is a positive or negative development? có thể bố cục bài như sau (nếu theo hướng partly - positive=negative):
    • Body 1:  Giải thích vì sao lại positive 
      • Main idea: The Internet provides instant access to news from around the world. 
        • Supporting idea: Users can stay updated in real-time, which is particularly crucial in a fast-paced world where events unfold rapidly.
        • Example: The Arab Spring uprisings from 2010 to 2012 exemplify how the Internet's instant access to news allowed users to stay updated in real-time, playing a crucial role in facilitating global awareness and solidarity during a period of rapid and transformative political events.>> IELTS  TUTOR  hướng  dẫn PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI 30/5/2020 IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (kèm bài sửa HS đạt 6.5)
      • Main idea 2: Online platforms offer a wide range of news sources, allowing users to access diverse perspectives and opinions. 
        • Supporting idea: This can contribute to a more well-rounded understanding of global events.
        • Example: For instance, during a major international event such as a political summit or a crisis, a Twitter user can follow tweets from mainstream media outlets, independent journalists, government officials, and eyewitnesses on the ground. This multifaceted approach provides a more comprehensive and nuanced understanding of the situation compared to relying solely on one news source.
    • Body 2: Giải thích vì sao lại negative 
        • Main idea: The Internet is susceptible to the spread of fake news and misinformation. 
        • Supporting idea: Without proper verification, inaccurate information can circulate quickly, leading to the formation of false beliefs and perceptions.
        • Example: 
          • One real-life example illustrating the susceptibility of the Internet to the spread of fake news and misinformation is the case of the "Pizzagate" conspiracy theory in 2016. In this incident, false and baseless claims circulated on social media and various websites, alleging that a pizzeria in Washington, D.C., was involved in a child sex-trafficking ring linked to prominent political figures.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 1 (Complaint letter) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)
          • The Momo Challenge hoax in 2018 exemplifies how the Internet's susceptibility to fake news can lead to the rapid spread of unfounded fears. Without proper verification, sensationalized misinformation about a non-existent threat fueled widespread panic among parents and communities.

IV. Tham khảo bài mẫu IELTS TUTOR

In our interconnected world, the Internet has emerged as a powerful tool, shaping the way we access and perceive news. From my perspective, this trend encompasses both positive and negative aspects.

On the one hand, there are numerous reasons supporting the notion that this trend is positive. Firstly, the Internet's ability to offer instantaneous access to news from across the globe constitutes a significant positive development. The Arab Spring uprisings from 2010 to 2012 exemplify the Internet's pivotal role in fostering global awareness and solidarity during a transformative political period, allowing users to follow unfolding events in real-time and contributing to a sense of unity and understanding. Secondly, the diverse range of news sources available on online platforms is another positive aspect. In fact, users can access a plethora of perspectives and opinions, leading to a more comprehensive understanding of global events.>> IELTS TUTOR có hướng dẫn kĩ PHÂN TÍCH ĐỀ THI THẬT TASK 2 (dạng advantages & disadvantages) NGÀY 04/8/2020 IELTS WRITING GENERAL MÁY TÍNH (kèm bài được sửa hs đi thi)

On the other hand, the Internet's influence is not devoid of drawbacks, with a notable negative development being its susceptibility to the rapid spread of fake news and misinformation. It cannot be denied that in the absence of proper verification mechanisms, inaccurate information can circulate rapidly, leading to the formation of false beliefs and perceptions. The "Pizzagate" conspiracy theory in 2016 vividly illustrates this issue, where baseless claims on social media falsely linked a Washington, D.C., pizzeria to a non-existent child sex-trafficking ring involving prominent political figures. The Momo Challenge hoax in 2018 serves as another example, highlighting how the Internet's susceptibility to fake news can incite widespread panic by disseminating unverified information about a nonexistent threat, fueling unfounded fears among parents and communities.

In conclusion, the Internet's impact on global awareness is a double-edged sword. While it provides instant access to information and diverse perspectives, it is equally susceptible to the dissemination of fake news and misinformation.

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